Reviews for The red dancer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to read more soon. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this and hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. Aww leader lady is being cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I'm laughing. This chapter is funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazingly funny. I love it so much. Jaz has officially made it to being my face oc of all time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot. It's so neat. And cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some sentences are in complete and some words are missing and I get so confused I almost cry. Please fix it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was actually planning on writing a story with a character like yours, I came up with the idea about a year ago, but now I can see its not original, bummer oh well I'll still write it but so you know I didn't steal the idea from you. Just a fair warning. |
![]() ![]() you relly need to right more it's so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story. Just the fact that the main character is a black girl makes me happy! However, I do see some grammar issues and I think some of your sentences were cut short. I also think you should put () to show a change in view point. Other than that a great story. I'm adding this to my favorites! |
![]() ![]() I want Alucard back |
![]() ![]() I lllllloooooovvvveeee IT |