Nothing is better then cookies ._.

I love Jaz's personality!

Jaz: I'm going to cut off you favorite part if you don't!
Alucard: It'll regenerate

hahaha favorite line! XD

Oh my... This story just seems to get better and better as the chapters continue! W

Lol can't wait for your next chapter. i like it so far :D

If i could add this story to my favorites again i would. I love it. You have a lot of creativity. but i would suggest rereading you work, i feel like i have to fill in the blanks an example is this line,

"Women's' a little tiny blade is going to totally kill a tough bastard like you."

I had guessed you meant women's intuition.

Other than that i have nothing to critique. 3

I liked it, please write more. :)

this is actually quite a good story line. id love to see more, but be carful when you write because you tend to skip a few words at times, and it can be strange when trying to piece the story together.

id love to read more *begging on knees*, so please write! its a great story line, but you could add some more action.

byes :)

So cool~ I love it and hope to read more of your story soon~

That was good. I think you should continue this story. There are some gramatical errors and some was a bit confusing but over all I like the concept. You should continue and write more!