|Reviews for AutoCycle|
| Asarikou-chan chapter 40 . 10/7/2012
An interesting story. It is quite fascinating to see how you connected three universes like this.
The links between Kouji, Kouichi and Izumi are quite amusing. Their characters suit the reincarnations. Funny how over-protectiveness could turn into sth bitter and dark. Hopefully, Kouji is wise enough to have his limits.
Thanking about it, I guess if Zoe feels sth a bit more than friendship for Kouichi then the tension between her and Kouji could be harmful to all of them. Yet, that might not be applied in Kouji. There is nothing dark or hidden about him so nothing to be scared of unlike Alexiel's brother.
| Emil C chapter 40 . 10/5/2012
I get it! I really do! And the story is soooo amazingly entrancing!
I mean, I was swallowed by the story and felt that the legend was being told to me from an old man with mystic powers about a long forgotten land or something!
The feeling was amazing! I understand the Trinity you used there! But that means that Zoe will now that her spirit has been awakened with the one of Ceres... She might become more over protective of Koichi and jealous of Kouji...
This cannot turn very right...
Because it means that if there ever is a moment when Koichi have to decide between the group and Kouji he will in fact betray them...
Hey, maybe I'm being very nosy in thi story, but do you think you can make a legen about JP as well...?
Maybe he was a servant boy...?
Here is my theory... Just because I love his character I develop his own little story and would love if you would use it and sprinkle it with you ccharm.
There was once a rumor between the court of the inner planets, a secret that could destroy the balance of the planets. It was when Zeus, father of the Princess Jupiter and Sailor Scout had an encounter with Athena, Mercury's dotting mother... It was said that the two had a bond stronger than the other planets but nobody but the Queen of the Moon knew about... It was from that unholy union that brought birth to a child, a male child, his birth was condemned by the two kingdoms and kept zealosly from the others, because they knew Chaos would come forth and bring destruction to the one who had teh power to overcome it all as the prophecy foretold. Why...? Because not only was giving birth to a child of royal blood from two kingdoms forbidden... But impossible as well... As two kingdoms could not fertilize in normal circumstances one another.
The child thus, was entrusted to Queen Serenity, which in her greates act of love foretelling the fall of the kingdom of Ceres entrusted the child to the Queen to work on her ranks... The boy was no more, and it became a man... a man who was always beside the Queen, but never spoke a word... To the point that people thought he might be mute... and it was to her alone who he would utter a word as deep inside him burned a light greater even to that of the Galaxy itself.
| Berry Doyle chapter 39 . 10/1/2012
You have no idea how much I love this story. One of my favorite things so far is how their powers are gradually compounding. It's really interesting. My other favorite thing is Koichi. I just want to give him a hug.
| Asarikou-chan chapter 39 . 9/28/2012
Wait a minute! Stab Zoe. Oh God. If she was conscious, she might have asked Kouji to but not when she is in this condition. Well, I guess if Zoe saved Koichi that might relieve her guilt...even if a little bit.
And Kouichi is truly dead...Somehow I don't feel that. Maybe because there is a chance that he would live. The reincarnations thing is quite confusing but all in all interesting.
Even though, I read about Angle Sanctuary, I feel like checking my sources again. Actually I have to.
| Asarikou-chan chapter 38 . 9/14/2012
Not a bad timing to leave that world...A bit late unfortunately.
Seriously, Poor Kouichi hadn't even healed from what happened before to get hit again. And that would certainly increase Zoe's guilt. The poor girl. I doubt she would get over it easily. Or at all.
Angel's Sanctuary is next. Neat. I read sth about it long time ago. I should re-check it then :)
| Emil C chapter 38 . 9/13/2012
Coool! But still, I kind of lost track of the story here and there...
To be honest, I DON-T EVEN GET IN WHICH WORLD WE-RE IN THIS TIME...
But enough about me, I love your story, and honestly can't wait to see where the next place they visit shall take them! Still, does it mean that Zoe still holds the powers of Ceres of the Sailor Moon Saga? Did she also fused with thos powers of the dark entity of Ceres as well?
How long will it take you to write the next chapter, because this one was pretty short! T-T I would love to iddle in your stories forever more, though!
Anyhow, I am really grateful for you keeping JP in command as the only witness or let us say the most coherent witness of the events. Because for me he's like a silent narrator who isn't decieved by his own feelings and sees things in a logical way as to give the reader a better point of what is happening. Why? Because the twins point of view is to byass and sole concern is one another forgetting always about the others. (Which I consider insensible and veryselfish of them...)
Anyhow, next world! Which is what...? Please! PLEASE! TELL ME!
| Asarikou-chan chapter 37 . 9/12/2012
That was a good point to end a chapter. Cliff hanger yes but interesting one.
So we new the story of Ceres. I wonder if Zoe has something to do with that. Hopefully, they would meet up with the twins soon(who knows maybe the broken outer door is related to the twins somehow...XD)
| Emil C chapter 36 . 6/26/2012
Oh, brotherhood... What would we do without it, right?
I just love reading this parts of family bonding...
Seriously, I mean it has become a taboo to always have fighting brothers that have a rough relationship.
But we know that's not always true! So it makes me really glad to see both siblings taking sich care and compassionate love for each other! :)
Although, I am a single child... Gosh, I had an identical twin too... That way I wouldn't feel so compelled by reading about this beautiful relationship between Koji and Koichi! But, to tell you the true...
I feel kind of jealous of them! XD
Yet again, I was kind of freaked out for a moment there with "so much love between them"... I was like: "God! I hate gay incest between brothers!" O.o
Nah! Just kidding! Kind of... But it's true that there was an instance when I said: "This is soooo wrong!" ;D
Well, thanks for another wonderful chapter and I want more JP and Takuya! Yup! Or Zoe and Tommy! And You know I like JP an Zoe together, but I think ther hasn't been enough conversations between JP and Takuya! Besides, we both know that Takuya also loves Zoe... so I think it's time for the boys to start feeling jealous of each other's relationship with the "Wonder Woman"! I mean, with those tight clothes she wears in her transformation... Hmmm...Hmmmmm! Call me "Super Man" and fly with me Zoe...
I know it's wrong now that I'm 18, but think about it this way, I had a crush on her SINCE I WAS 12! So there's nothing wrong in that! You know what was wrong? I had a crush on Sakura from Card Captor Sakura when I was 9 and she was 12! XD Man! I liked an older woman! XD Now if I say I like her I'm a pedophile! O.o I hate growing up!XC
| Asarikou-chan chapter 36 . 6/22/2012
Well, I know what it means when a conversation is a pure pain.
Hehe, I could hardly follow those two in their conversation. Seriously, they could hardly stay on track but that is understandable after what they went through. Yet, I guess they need a long talk while eating Ramen. This conversation was kinda one sided. Kouji was talking and Kouichi was listening. I didn't spot his agreement on what Kouji said wisely. Ah,Kouji is acting really mature here. He didn't explode at least when Kouichi kept uttering fragments of don't.
All in all, that was nice. I hope the others are doing well.
| Moonsmile-chan chapter 35 . 6/4/2012
\\\Oops. Koichi doesn't seem happy at all(well duh)
I love Ayashi No Ceres and I absolutely liked this chapter. It would be strange if their cell-phones worked.
It is really, really, really ridiculous to take a walk in a strange world. What is going on Koichi's mind?
So good so far.\\\
| Asarikou-chan chapter 35 . 6/2/2012
Hmmm. That wasn't expected. Really. I didn't expect Kouichi to act so...different yet it had been long time since he was conscious and talked. I am not familiar with the anime but I had watched the first ep long time ago and read its reports several times so I know enough to survive yet it was quite confusing. I mean that cord on Kouichi's neck. Does that mean he became the reincarnation for one of those...legends? you said it is set before the anime so how long exactly. The original story started with Aya 15,ne?
And it is not bad to have a filler chapter. They need to collect themselves and to answer question about what had happened in other cycles. It is the sixth cycle,ne?
| Asarikou-chan chapter 34 . 6/2/2012
The first paragraph was so cute. How sad it is that the peaceful moments didn't continue for long. Hehe, I didn't expect less form the others. They wouldn't stand to watch even if they could hardly do anything. Well, I am curious to say the effects of their interference after they disappeared. Zoe looks cool in her new "outfit" yet seriously, Zee why your (transformation\evolution) clothes are always...ummm lacking some pieces hehe. Just kiddy, Zoe. It is not like it is your choice, ne?
And certainly that was a good timing to...vanish.
| Emil C chapter 34 . 5/17/2012
Dude you rule!
I keep reading your story and even though I don't write a review for each one of your chapters, be sure that I'm here and I'm your number ine fan! I loved how Tommy asked Takuya if Zoe and JP were going to get married!LMAO!
Also, Sailor Ceres? COOOOOOL! I can totally see Zoe in that straplees shirt with short, short, short Sailor Moon Classic's... WELL IT WERE SHOTS BUT THEY WERE SHORT, RIGHT? ;D
Well, I just hope for the guys to wind up on wilder grounds now!
Also, have you already plan a place for JP to become the hero?
I though he was quite useless with that hammer! XD
I have to admit that I loved Sailor Moon eventhough they were all girls! Because it was meant for guys! I mean, tight clothed young girls showing all their "goodies" and some of them even lesbians... I was like: "Dear, God let them kiss...PLEASE! LET THEM KISS!"
Anyhow, I can't believe that the Sailor Scouts of the inner planets had to undergo by 4 transformations, Serena by 6 while the Outter Sailor Scout just had 2 ... oh, well-!
In other things, do you remember my suggestions? I would LOVE to see him as the last wielder of the RAVE MASTER! SOOOO COOOL!
JP would be like: "And you thought I couldn't handle ONE sword! Look at me handling A SWORD THAT CAN TURN INTO 10 DIFFERENT SWORDS! TAKE A LOOK AT THE 'TEN COMMANDMENTS'! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!"
And then Takuya would be like: "Wow, JP! You are... YOU are... Such a geek for reading this manga and watching that show...!"
Yeah... JP being the cool dweller of THE RAVE! COOOOL! Even getting Siegheart's powers! (Meaning a skill full whole elemental mage with high profficiency with Lightning magic) You know? He travels thru time and then dies in the past? He could give the RAVE to JP and before departing to his eternal dwelling rest place... He could inherit his powers! SOOOO COOOOL!
Or maybe he winds up in Fairy Tail land and becomes THE DRAGON SLAYER MAGE OF LIGHTNING AND THUNDER!
I'm hyperventilating here! SOOO COOOOOOOOL!
| Moonsmile-chan chapter 34 . 5/17/2012
Koichi looks like the savior despite everything in the last few cycles. That is looks amazing in her new outfit!
Amazing chappie as usual! I am soooooo *exited* for the next cycle. I wish it will be a bit merciful and not another war. for the twins' sake.
| Asarikou-chan chapter 33 . 5/10/2012
Well, that was certainly interesting. Kouji is doing quite good job. Not perfect as he didn't really reach Kouichi till now but I guess he is close enough. Ummm why do I feel that the thread he gripped at the end(The one he was confused which color) is the one who may take him to Kouichi. A strange title, to be honest. I didn't get what it has to do with the chapter unless you related the white, silver threads with the moon.
The final part was sweet you know. A bit humorous as well. It is good the others are relaxing. They need it as much as the twins. Hopefully, the twins will relax for real soon...