Is this the last chapter?

This is very cool

Loving this.

I'm sorry, I think you missed some part of the explanation, Gaara was suspicious and lied to the guy on the grounds that he has proven himself, even personally to Gaara, as loyal?

It's odd for the man who, at least from my understanding, was shown to largely blamw gaara for taking his wife and did the absolutely not for the village, completely unnecessary act of ordering the only person who supposedly cared for him to try and kill him, act as it was a necessary thing

I like this story. You played the heart-wrenching injustice of his story well.

It's slow and lacks plot. Waste of time reading it. It's not necessarily poorly written, but besides a few side quests being completed there is zero story.

PLEASE COME BACK I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND I'M ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH IT!

I’m gonna miss this story. It was so wonderfully read. Your writing is superb!

hUH.
Gaara u ok man? like im pretty sure you died? uhhhhhhh

gaara dear child what the fuck is wrong with you

Great chapter! I love this story :)

Very cool. A bit quick paced in the parasite arc, but overall a fun read.

Rasa, don't.
Wasn't Yashamaru enough?

You did that splendid! The plot twist/reveal! That was awesome. You did this like it would be in an official anime. Good writing!