|Reviews for The First Shifting Grain|
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/24
| vellisavet chapter 16 . 6/22
What a wonderful story! Full of emotions, adventure and gaara moments . I loved it! From the moment I found it till now I haven't stop reading!
| MillionLights chapter 16 . 4/22
Oh my god please update - this story is beautiful!
| Rainbine208 chapter 9 . 4/20
Its a good story, minus some grammar mistakes, but why do you throw random japanese for no good reason? It ruins just about all immersion, with noble san and random arigato when im ninety percent sure you had characters say thank you
| Sprengkamp chapter 16 . 4/8
Th for the chapter
| Meilaan chapter 1 . 3/21
I love this story. Completely and wholeheartedly. Gaara’s character contrast, the entire plot line you’ve created, even the OCs are an enjoyment. The style you’ve written this in absolutely captivating, and oh gosh, I’ve re-read this story so many times to count. It’s so dam good. Anyways, thanks for writing this. Mei
| ocomhdhain1 chapter 16 . 3/17
is this discontinued?
| DelRae chapter 8 . 2/24
6 years and this is still one of the better time travel stories I’ve ever read because of how much potential gaara’s internal conflict has vs time travel characters in Konoha. I understand this story prob won’t be updated (or at least not for a long while) but I’m glad I can still come back to reread it.
| ForestShadeau chapter 16 . 2/22
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
| armysugakookie chapter 7 . 2/12
ahhh these kids make me wanna squeeze them into raisins
| armysugakookie chapter 6 . 2/12
the gaara, ANBU, and the kid scene all the pauses and silences are so awkward and hilarious XD
| armysugakookie chapter 5 . 2/12
i really like the librarian's way of understanding time travel
i never thought if it that way
| Bellalovecake chapter 16 . 1/1
I hope you are fine
| PrinceIess chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
Nearly forgot this timeless classic until i reread it and ugh... it hasn't been updated in so long nothing has broken me like this has... regardless this story slaps thank you for the art
| GuitarBOSS chapter 13 . 12/17/2019
I feel like the conflict in this chapter could have been solved by Gara telling the first ninja unafflicted he saw that the bombs were in the people he was killing.