Reviews for The First Shifting Grain
Dangernoodle208 chapter 9 . 4/20/2020
Its a good story, minus some grammar mistakes, but why do you throw random japanese for no good reason? It ruins just about all immersion, with noble san and random arigato when im ninety percent sure you had characters say thank you
Sprengkamp chapter 16 . 4/8/2020
Th for the chapter
lmao im emily now chapter 1 . 3/21/2020
I love this story. Completely and wholeheartedly. Gaara’s character contrast, the entire plot line you’ve created, even the OCs are an enjoyment. The style you’ve written this in absolutely captivating, and oh gosh, I’ve re-read this story so many times to count. It’s so dam good. Anyways, thanks for writing this. Mei
ocomolinaehain chapter 16 . 3/17/2020
is this discontinued?
DelRae chapter 8 . 2/24/2020
6 years and this is still one of the better time travel stories I’ve ever read because of how much potential gaara’s internal conflict has vs time travel characters in Konoha. I understand this story prob won’t be updated (or at least not for a long while) but I’m glad I can still come back to reread it.
ForestShadeau chapter 16 . 2/22/2020
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
TETRACIDE chapter 7 . 2/12/2020
ahhh these kids make me wanna squeeze them into raisins
TETRACIDE chapter 6 . 2/12/2020
the gaara, ANBU, and the kid scene all the pauses and silences are so awkward and hilarious XD
TETRACIDE chapter 5 . 2/12/2020
i really like the librarian's way of understanding time travel
i never thought if it that way
very creative
Bellalovecake chapter 16 . 1/1/2020
I hope you are fine
PrinceIess chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
Nearly forgot this timeless classic until i reread it and ugh... it hasn't been updated in so long nothing has broken me like this has... regardless this story slaps thank you for the art
GuitarBOSS chapter 13 . 12/17/2019
I feel like the conflict in this chapter could have been solved by Gara telling the first ninja unafflicted he saw that the bombs were in the people he was killing.
Leaf Green Tea chapter 16 . 10/15/2019
Holy shit dude! This story is amazing!
willfinch chapter 16 . 10/12/2019
thank you so much for making this. It was a blast to read and I wish I could'v e read even more chapters.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/11/2019
This still remains one of the best stories I’ve ever read, your characterization is so well done. I suppose you’ll never update again because it’s been years so I’ll have to learn to be satisfied with that ending.
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