Reviews for White as a Whistle
DharmaMotorPool chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
This was lovely. I wouldn't have known English wasn't your first language if you hadn't said. Thank you for contributing!
InvisibleGrl8006 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I really liked this story and your writing was powerful and emotional. Don't worry about your English though I think you did okay :-)
Cristina chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Wow, English is not your first language? Why then are you so good at descriptive writing and conveying emotion? Why did I actually FEEL that feather on MY OWN skin while I was reading your words? Why did I think about MY first love when I read about how you were describing it? I always creep this fandom's fics because I love Lie To Me but this is the first review I'm making because I could not say nothing about this story. I have watched this episode a gazillion times and reading your story made me think about this girl differently FOR THE FIRST TIME. I never thought to consider her perception because I'm always wrapped up in Cal and the case of course. I think you did a wonderful job at making me just stop and think about it. I want to watch the episode again because of your amazing ability to evoke certain feelings. Well done! And I really hope to read more of your work very soon :D
CharlieBravo chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Aw babes I'm glad I could calm you a bit ;) I know how it gets in my head sometimes so I try to help where I can. {hugs back}

Now your story... you're right, it's a hard one but I feel like you handled it with such beauty and sensitivity in your words. You breathed life into a character that didn't have life for me before. Her internal dialogue and especially your description of first love really hit home for me. And then there is this: "Because in the end, I still was the young woman that believed in happy endings."

A simple but evocative way to wrap up. Love it!