|Reviews for Tale of the Dragon's Wrath|
| Fishton chapter 1 . 2/6
that was awesome!
| CrystalSearcher chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
That was completely brilliant.
| Peppered Potato chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
You ruined Toothless in the most amazingly written way possible!
I don't know if I should love you or hate you right now... :p
| Azul Ocean chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Still creepy. You've kinda ruined Toothless for me, but that's the fun part. Now, how would this affect their relationship? Would Hiccup be able to trust Toothless again? Even knowing that they were "even"
I get the feeling that this would be that terrible secret that Hiccup has to bear alone.
| SilverSamurai26 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
You just ruined my ENTIRE VIEW on Toothless! ... It was awesome! *v* I like having more to think about when I watch a movie. That's why I read Fanfiction. XD Great job, I can definitely see why you won. :D
| lilo202 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I've got a chill down my spine.
Your writing is beautiful, it's creepy enough to make me feel butterflies (and not of the love-sick kinds) in my stomach and subtle enough to maintain that sense of mystery.
I love you forever for using the book in your in your stories.
| Cilone chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Oh my god. I've heard theories on toothless being the one to bite Hiccup's leg off, but this put a new twist to it. I love it!
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
This was a very interesting take on Toothless and Hiccup's relationship and what happened after the attack on Red Death.
Thank you for writing and posting, it's appreciated.
| vXVIKINGXv chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
that was very good it gave a different look on how he lost his leg and i enjoyed reading this
| Angel Fantasy chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
For the creepy side, you rock. But for the vengeance side, I personally think you fail... Because although it is true that dragons are full of wrath and vanity, they also have wisdom deeply engraved into their genes, and with wisdom always comes forgiveness. Had Hiccup not given Toothless the means to fly after he shot him down, now that vengeance would have its foundation and the right to be carried out. But Hiccup did not leave the dragon grounded - he realized his mistake and worked hard to redeem himself in creating a tailfin that would help the Night Fury soar through the skies once more. For Toothless to bite and eat the very leg that controlled his tailfin - his only way to fly -, he would have to turn insane and want to die, for 'a downed dragon is a dead dragon', as Gobber quoted.
And if dragons really do carry out vengeances, Stoic the Vast would be long dead. He mistreated Toothless too much for the Night Fury to forgive him (chained him, handled him violently, insulted him, left him to die in the movie), oppositely to Hiccup who did hurt him some but then made up for it with food, care, security, friendship and the means to fly again.
Just my opinion the story's still good though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
To add, I guess this vengeance idea would work if Toothless knew for sure it was really Hiccup who shot him down in the first place.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Wow. Loved the way you set up the sequence of nightmares-memories-conclusions, interspersed with the changing of settings an conversations of a still traumatized Hiccup. I'm still holding on to a notion Toothless grabbed him by the leg as a necessity rather than vengeance, so he can look at Hiccup's questioning face and think "I had to do it this way. So deal with it, and let's move on."
| AriciaBetelguese chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
To answer your question, yes, you did.
But the story is so creepy and stunning and heartwrenching and wonderful all at once! I envy your writing, honest...
Butbutbut it's not equal at all, Toothless! Don't you see? You can fly and you can walk, but Hiccup can only walk.
Okay, that doesn't make much sense.
Still, it's a really beautiful story. Thank you for the experience!
Too lazy to log in,
| 1000Nachts chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Oh, wow. That was amazing. I never considered it from that perspective. And was incredibly well written too. Love your work.
| HornedHelmet chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
To answer your question, yes you ruined Toothless. Now my less calm self:
YOU FUCKING BASTARDASS BITCH! I hate you! YOU SUCK!