Reviews for A Different Kind of Order
Zebrastreifen chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
hottest Hotch/Emily-smut-story I have ever read!
emilyhotchner-and-olicityfan chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Wow! Hot!
AlpineHolly chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Have to say you have some talent here my friend ... love your work.
Hotly81173 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
:) hahaha I'm giddy right now and might I say a little turned on... ok a lot turned on. time for a cold shower. I would so let Hotch order me around in any way he wanted to. :) Awesome story.
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I really irony know what to put other than WOW!
gibbsluvr chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Alpha HOTch. Nuff said!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Amazing story! Very hot! I really enjoyed it!
domilue chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
My apologies for the late public posting of a review. I finally figured out why FF wasnt' letting me me post. Thank you so much for this awesome fic. You took my vague little prompt and went to town on it. Love it so so much. Alpha Hotch is too sexy and YOU are the mistress of smut. Thank you again for this totally awesome fic. :)
x-MJ-x chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
STOP PRESS...

GUESS WHO'S HERE?

Only your favourite reviewer in the whole wide world right?

;)

:P

I am genuinely sorry that it has taken me so long to review you know all of my excuese and graciously you have accepted them so now it comes time for me to tell you that your stories have been the biggest God send I could have wished for, I know we haven't caught up properly but I have been going through a rough time and coming on here and being able to escape into the H/P rich land you create so effortlessly in these stories has been the best thing for me. I really wanted to let you know that I have been reading and sending you lots of love anyway... but I think that this really is the best place to tell you all about the million and one reasons why you are and always will be a special and fantastic author...

I started with this one first because it shocked me so much... I mean WOAH! Seriously...

This is amazing - I think it was just so different that I didn't recognise my favourite Romanticist admist this absolute sexiness...

I am so used to the rich, heavy loving from you and then

THIS

INCREDIBLE...

Ok so...

I just loved the way that this entire thing was thought out, I loved how it involved a case but that that wasn't the most important thing - I think that it was nice have that as a background and to really build up the tension for the secod half of the story.

Again I love the way that you portrayed the awkwardness of Emily and how she seems to be uncomfortable doing anything which exposes her femininity and therefore makes her vulnerable. I adore that you had that sarcastic banter she is so famous for being a big part of the initial scenes - it just made it perfect.

Then Morgan being such a MAN... I think you have or definitely should have conquered your fear of writing him by now - yu understand him and you translate him so well into these stories that I just feel like I'm watching an episode. I thought his lewd comments and her reactions to them were spot on... I thought it was lovely that you carried through the team's reactions all the way to Reid and then finally... FINALLY... Yes I was frustrated by this point... Hotch's...

Wow...

I felt his jaw hit the floor almost about the same time as mine did (for different reasons - this style was just jaw-droppingly brilliant)

Ok so now let's get started...

I loved the throbbing jealousy that is just threaded through this and how it caused him to be so reactionary in getting up and getting right into her personal space... Oh just yummy...

and THAT... KISS

YES...

Oh it was gorgeous, gorgeous , gorgeous...

You are just a star...

Your description is just lovely and the emotions just comes leaping off the page...

Then all the drama with the UNSUB leading to seething, angry Hotch turning up at her door as she is preparing to get herself out of the dress...

Oh delicious... Do you know how sexy this was?

You know I am a HUGE Thomas fan anyway (YUMMY) but God angry, sexy Aaron had me shaking in my boots never mind Emily...

Goodness me his silence was SO loud!

GAH!

Then her desperation to prove herself was just delectable and her insistence that she could follow any order and then ping *the lightbulb moment* where I realised where my favourite person was taking me...

Lovely...

Her desperation... her panic that he wasn't going to respond...

But the fact that she kept going, kept trying to make him respond until eventually he snaps...

OH MY GOD SEXY!

I love it his instructional and commanding tone...

I kept thinking when Emily's finished with him can I have him, pretty please...

Then the love scene...

GORGEOUS!

INCREDIBLE!

EROTIC!

AMAZING!

Then at the end he's back to being my favourite romantic hero and he was concerned that he had hurt her but she demisses his worry and then goes back to the sexy talk with suggesting that there is going to be a second occurence of this command and obey thing and he's not so sure he can play subservient and relinquish his alpha male role but then the curiosity and the lust to see her in that commandeering role just overtakes him and I must say that I am equally intrigued... please tell me there's an 'Emily in control' sequel to this... please...

I just LOVED this, LOVED IT.

See I told you I would submit a review and I do try to stay true to my word. Stay tuned for more.

Love,

Your absolute favourite reviewer- you know it's true! :P -

Michelle xxx
missluluprentiss chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Oh goodness, loved it! Super hot. I'd love to see Em in that dress ;) Garcia is a godess! I also love Alpha Hotch...yum!
BeautifulDisaster123 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I loved it!
VanInBlack chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Oh wow, that was incredibly hot! Fantastic story!
Longbourn22 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Breathe! oh my god! this is sooooo hawt! I...I...will be right back...

geez! no, wait...still feeling hot and fluttery! you're great!

loved it much!

thank you!

Lizzie

Oh, i need to take an ice cold shower now!
a chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
That was a really good story.
HGRHfan35 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I waited till tonight to read this. What a perfect, HOT, sexy bedtime tale and just PURRRRFECT for me *wraaooohrw* :D

Talk about my Alpha-Male complex coming back to life *shivers*

You are just so &$#%! perfect in writing smut.

*scampers of to get an ice-cold drink*
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