Reviews for 17 Years Later
Alzeno chapter 8 . 4/19
update
Alzeno chapter 9 . 4/18
update please
DarkBlur2005 chapter 8 . 4/17
Forgot to add
Appearance: looks like a 14 year old version of final getsuga tensho ichigo with red eyes, grey hair, and jet black bandages, and a White trench coat with red highlights outlined in black.
DarkBlur2005 chapter 9 . 4/17
Name: Tensa Mugetsu
Age: 14
Hero
Crew Member
Personality: Kind to friends, crew members and allies, dark to marines, and villains, and impartial to strangers
Backstory: parents killed by corrupt marine, trained by Master Swordsman and Hand-to-Hand Combat expert, ate the Vizard Vizard Fruit, left to train in the Deserts of Alabasta, Joins Monkey D. Ace's Pirate Crew.
Dream: Help his captain succeed in his ambition.
Devil Fruit: Vizard Vizard Fruit.
Powers/Abilities: Gives user a Zanpakutou(preferably Zangetsu ), and Ichigo (from Bleach) Hollow Powers, later unlocks Vasto Lorde Mask from battle with Ulquiorra.
trina chapter 9 . 7/23/2014
love this when r u gonna update!?
DragonHeartFairy chapter 9 . 10/28/2013
I give it a thumbs up
xpirate557465 chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
your story is awesome...i want to ask u something can u at least give me the hint of what happened to u kill him or sent him to another world...another world?/ yes anouther world would be perfect to sent luffy to as u said e disappeared 17 years ago...
xpirate57378 chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
u are sometimes calling ace luffy...?
Anonymous chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
I need to mention to mention that Lorrello D. Taylors 800 million beli bounty was because he beat a lot of strong people in both the navy marines and the world government and also because of his ability to fight on equal grounds with the Pirate King Monkey D. Luffy. His unknown age makes it so you feel like he's been around for a long time.
Anonymous chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
Name: Lorrello D Taylor (nickname: Tricky Tails)

Age: Unknown? (Keep it unknown, please)

Occupation: Captain of the Tricky Pirates

Flag: An One Piece style skull that has a scar running down from the top left of the skull through its right eye(which is winking) and down to the bottom right of it, instead of the bones there are two tails sprouting from the bottom of the skull and crossing through it.

Ship: The Tricky Mermaid
It is made out of the same type of wood that the Strawhats, Thousand Sunny is made out of (the Jewel Tree Adam), its figure head is a full sculpture of a mermaid winking.
(EVERYTHING ELSE ABOUT THE SHIPS DESCRIPTION I LEAVE TO YOU)

Hero/villain: hero and villain

Personality: Always serious and never laughs at the one piece humor, when with ace and his crew , he'll chuckle at the way Ace is. NEVER KILLS ANYONE!

Appearance: Around 2 meters tall, long really dark blue hair that falls down to the back of his knees, a scar that runs from the top left corner of his head through his left eye and down to the back of his neck, he wears black shoes, black pants, a grey belt with a platinum buckle, a white long-sleeve button up shirt with a brown leather vest and a pure black coat that reaches down to his ankles , gold, silver and bronze buttons, on the back of the coat is his pirate symbol. Two swords at each side of his hips (he crafted both of them by himself)

Style: Two Sword Style
He usually fights with his fists and legs, if made a little serious he'll use one sword, if made more serious he'll use two swords but if made to take the fight really seriously then he connects the hilts of the swords together so that they're both facing different directions and spins it at his opponents. His speed and strength is on a whole different level from Ace and his crew.

Back story: He was a Marine once , but because he learned of a secret that told him just how corrupt many of his senior officers were, but before he could run away they saw him and tried to kill. They believed taht they had killed him as he was lying before them a bloody heap. When they started talking to each other on what to do with his body he finally opened his eyes, he was done with playing dead so he snuck out and got himself cleaned up. When he left the island he decided to become a pirate since the corrupt oficers were certainly going to put a bounty on his head because of what he found out
He got himself a strong crew of trusted men and women who he befriended through tough times with. After getting a 800 million beli (actual money name) bounty, he met the strawhat pirates and over a misunderstanding between the two crews had a great battle. It surprised the strawhats that the Tricky Pirates were able to hold their own against them. The fighting stopped immediately oncethe two pirate captains stomachs growled and Sanji needed to get back to cooking the food. Both crews were able to fix the misunderstanding and became great friends, especially the captains. Through coincidence they met alot after that, Lorrello D. Taylor and Monkey D. Luffy would still fight, mainly for the both of them to get stronger.

I hope you allow it so that Lorrello D. Taylor and his crew will be able to help Ace on a couple of occasions. Thank you
lindaa12tear chapter 9 . 9/19/2013
Please updated
Peanut61654 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Didn't know if you were still taking these ideas but here is mine anyway xD

Name: Leo Masa

Age: 28

Hero/Villain: Hero

Occupation: Ex-marine

Personality: Leo is very stubborn. He never lets anyone tell him that he can't do something. He also has a 'sweet' side to him that rarely anyone ever sees. He is manipulative as well. Always likes to play tricks on others. He has a very good sense or humor and uses sarcasm often.

Back Story: Leo grew up in a marine base. His mother left him there when he was born so he never knew if mother or father. When he was about 13 he started to train as an official marine. He became very skilled with guns and firearms. Everyone in the base loved him a lot. One day a band of pirates can and burned down the base killing everyone inside and taking young Leo hostage. He was the pirates slave for over five years. At the age of eighteen he killed the captain of his captors and escaped. He made it safely to a large town and found the love his life there. She was everything to him till one day she died of a rare sickness. Now Leo lives on his own searching for happiness...

Dream: His dream is to finally be happy...

Devil Fruit (If character has): none

Powers/Abilities: Skilled with firearms. Can use any type but his favorite is a handgun. Can use cannons and such.

Appearance: A tall, lean man with dirty blonde has that's falls to his shoulders. He has very light blue eyes and a scare running down his cheek.

hope you like him :3
Guest chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
nice chapters hurry and continue
P.S. good choise about nami being his mom
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
I knew Nami would be his mom !
Oh and, I really like this story ! It's like .. the perfect sequel of One Piece
but .. I want to read other stories like this, so if you know some, tell me !
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
umm is Ace's mother Nami ? or some woman we do not know ?
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