|Reviews for Affair|
| Hannah-Kiwii chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Very short, I'm not sure I really understand WHY Hermione cheated...and why with Cormac of all people.
Don't get me wrong, I actually love the two together as a couple. I just think this fic feels like it starts in the middle of a story! I'd love to understand more about where you see Ron and Hermione's relationship at this point, and how Cormac came back into her life (or has he been in it all along, maybe?)
Your writing is good, and you're good at expressing emotion!
| D chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
They're not that terrible of a pairing, at least not the way they're portrayed here. Maybe if the fic had been a little longer...
| Loyal2Artemis chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Actually, they're not a half-bad couple. Nice job.