|Reviews for The Fall of the house of Potter|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7
Never liked Ginny.
| PaleFeed chapter 1 . 10/12
I liked it, was kind of boring at some points and yet the ending felt rushed. Other than that it was very enjoyable.
| Peverell chapter 1 . 9/22
Una historia bastante buena aunque hubiera sido genial que fuera Harry/Dafne/Hermione .
Hermione como Lady Peverell y Dafne como Lady Black.
| a fan of this chapter 1 . 8/19
maybe one of the best harry/daphne I've ever read, although I think the epilogue should have been much longer... but hey, it's still a very good story
| NulledVoid chapter 1 . 8/7
| Celticowl chapter 1 . 8/5
| ryandark chapter 1 . 7/6
Bob truly was a legend in fanfiction. RIP Bob.
| harold20200 chapter 1 . 5/1
I found the end of the story interesting, as it implies that Arthur was just like Ron, until Molly aligned his brain with a concussion or two.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
Great story and I'm looking forward to reading it again.
| scyfly chapter 1 . 1/21
bit of a weird start, lots of changes from the very beginning not just fifth year on. couldve done with a clearer time line or even just stating what year it is now.
the fight with voldy was just plain bs, clearly written to just get it over with and to start bashing. the killing curse cannot be blocked by magic but can somehow be redirected liked that?
harry orion black.
so he kept the name harry given by his blasted parents, he took the name orion for the father of sirius the same father that sirius hated. why not hadrian sirius black, or any variation of that. that is how it is done, taking the fathers name as the middle one.
far too much of this plot is so very forced. for example daphne just learned harry killed voldy and his inner circle, she also heard him say he wants her oppinion yet the first thing she does is threaten him for daring to treat her like a piece of meat? she then follows this up by explaining she's know her whole life she is nothing but a piece of meat... why would harry even want anything to do with a family that raises their child on these believes.
tell me that isnt forced writing?
| Katzztar chapter 1 . 12/22/2022
I am rereading this and something poked out to grab my attention. When Poppy first tells Dumbledore the extent of the illness afflicting the Death Eaters, including students, Dumbledore made the statement of how they failed to prevent students from taking the mark. Of course you failed Dumbledore! If the manip!Dumbles of this story followed canon-Dumbles approach to discipline (none) then he's done nothing to deter the youth from following Voldemort. After all, they got away attacking other students, it is logical that they would grow up believing they could still act like thugs and not be called out on it.
The baby Death eaters acted in school as if it's okay to attack muggleborns and purebloods that don't agree with DEs views, aka "blood traitors". Hell, in book 2 when they find Mrs. Norris petrified and the message Draco was standing not too far from Dumbledore & McGonagall when he they loudly claimed "You'll be next, Mudbloods!" ... no teacher called him out for that. If they showed such behaviors at school and never got in trouble, then of course they would continue on with their beliefs and when old enough, took Voldie's mark.
| Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 12/2/2022
Brilliant writing here hon! Loved this! ;)
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Absolutely Loved It!:)
Really Well Written:)!
Really Enjoyed This:)!:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2022
Very sad that Hermione and Harry never reconnected but glad that Black/Longbottom got the laws changed.
| redeyehawk23 chapter 1 . 8/19/2022
wtf killed Ginny at 54? lmao