Thanks for sharing!

I like it!

That was awesome! Very hot. And I think you made a great call, changing the tone to roleplay between lovers. It really worked with this relationship and made it a more fun (and funny) read. The constant interruptions made me laugh, like stopping to argue about potatoes. Heh. It was just great. And surprisingly in character. Great story!

ok so this has been bothering me for a hella long time (in a good way!) and i just really gotta get this off my chest. This fic helped me realize a bit more about myself and I just wanted to thank you for that (not referring to the whole 'werewolf has a pseudo-peen and diddles the fiddle with somebody' - i came to terms with that a while ago). It's just - this is the first fic i've ever read where a safe word was used and respected and apparently that's a new kink I have? Like, seriously! never read a fic that used a safeword before - and seeing it be respected and having everything come to a stop and seeing bonni and marceline talk it out and joke around a bit really got my engine running so to speak. This story! is wicked cute and I love it to bits!

uh Long Story Short: 1) never read a fic where a safeword was mentioned and used
2) never read a fic where the safeword was used and respected
3) apparently this is a new kink of mine
4) Thank You for helping me to learn more about myself, as well as experiencing
a form of fiddle diddling that I hadn't experienced before.
5) And I sincerely hope you're having a wicked nice day! Take Care!

Well wow I got nothin to say but I'm fucking damn SPEECHLESS!

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In a good way...

I think the brilliance of your fics lies largely in the characterization. Regardless of the kinks involved and whether or not I usually enjoy them, you write Marceline and Bubblegum so friggin' well that I can't help but relish in their pleasure. Even with plots like these, which would be outlandish and cumbersome in the hands of another author, become 100% believable when you take them on. The pet names, the safe words, the conversations about bodice-ripping and puppy-eyes saturated with hesitation and clumsy affection - GOD okay you have me waxing poetic about this. What I'm trying to say is that you just GET these characters and their relationship and universe, and you make it all work for you better than just about any other writer in this fandom.

After I figured out that Marceline was going to have... well a penis, I thought I'd hate it. Good thing is you didn't over do it, so I actually liked it... So kudos to you.

Wow that was the oddest piece of fan fiction I have ever read for this pairing... or well just for any fan pairings in general. It was interesting. Are you going to make another chapter? It was very creative and I like the idea of S&M and safe words. I enjoyed reading this.

Great story. Keep it up.

I love it. Everything was hot. Lol. I love how the whole thing with marceline being a shapeshifter and all gave her a penis lol. Everything about the whole plot was good. Especially Princess bubblegum's challenge to Marcy in the end. XD

oh mang, this is still too perfect. bless you.

That was a good story. Bubblegum and Marceline's sex life seems to be very...active. Will you make anymore stories like this? It would be interesting to read more of this shipping from you. I'll be pressing the favorite button below. Great job.

Read this on AO3 first, but had to come here to pay my respects. This was just so many kinks, OTP and fluff all at once. I LOVED this.

I was totally thinking exactly what you wrote about the dry orgasm before I got to that part!
Great minds...great, filthy minds.

XD you wrote this too? Damn, color me impressed