Reviews for Danger In the Dark
superzombielover123 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
You should do another chapter where bubblegum gets preggers and stuff. Good story though :-D
Sophia chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Oh man- That was really, really good.

Micah7 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
OMG! I had no idea how hot that shapeshifting ability of Marcelines could be put to use until now. I loved it. I also thought it was funny that they "rehearsed" it. How cute and how typical of Bubblegum. Honestly...the wolf change bit was hot and unexpectantly cool.

They make a perfect couple to me.
Shanti chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Got here from Tumblr. Oh god, I didn't think it was possible for a story to hit all of my pings, let alone hit them so very *perfectly*. Werewolves, futa, dominant females, hnnngIloveitsomuch. 333

The relationship dynamic you explored was really cute and refreshing, Marcelline is adorable in her little moments of hesitation and I love the dialog the two pitch back and forth. You've managed to make the story sweet, funny, and *very* hot at all the same time. I never could get into the show - not my type of humor, I think, though I can understand why people like it so much - but I definitely ship this pairing now.

I can't think of anything else to say besides gleeful keyboard smash, that's how much I enjoyed this. x3 I might actually show this to my girlfriend as an example of things I like . :x Anyway, thank you!
Anime Lady PIMP chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
LOL! I always thought marceline should grow a dick and fuck PB
IvorySea chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Woah, hot hot hot! Absolutely loved this, very nice and steamy! :)
livemusic181 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
that was hot
Voice of the shadow chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Overall I would say this was an excellent fanfiction my only main piece of criticism would have to be I felt a little too much explanation of emotions I think that more time could be spent describing the acts rather then how they made the individuals feel. But even that comment I had to think of. I offer you my congratulations on a well written story.
bored kid chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Marceline, y u no impregnate bubblegum?
Sunyata Anatman chapter 1 . 11/8/2011

Not gunna lie—I always liked werewolves when I was a little kid (before pop culture ruined them) and little red riding hood is a sexual Brothers Grimm tale anyway… so it makes sense. Now everything is about to balanced in the universe—though, if this tale could appeal to my assassin fetish then you might be on to something :D

If I had a fu manchu moustache and beard combo I would be stroking it right about now.

Anyways, I would be flabbergasted if anyone didn’t like this story— just reading every sentence was entertaining from beginning to end. I wouldn’t be too surprised if PB was a masochist— dunno why, it does seem too much of a shock. It makes for a very tender sadomasochist relationship between her and Marceline (if that even makes sense). I would say it is somewhat kinky, but trust me there are some strange fetishes out there. Some really really mentally scarring fetishes…

So yeah, this dynamic between the two balances out in the end and creates something real and beautiful—not too much dominatrix-y and not too much subjugation. This story reminds me of the song “Bang” by Armchair Cynics (*hint* listen to it *hint hint)—if sex could be embodied it would take form in this song… hell it could even be their theme song. Feral desire and pure love all wrapped up into one.

Well done ol’ chap. Well done
Extraintrovert chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I am perplexed how these two seem to inspire such a variety of people to create stories that are equal parts adorable and erotic, but I'm not about to question it since they are all a joy to read and this one is no exception, even if continually switching between giggling and salivating interferes slightly with my reading. More relevantly, the actions and lines were amazingly in-character, the humour wouldn't be out of place in the series itself (excepting the obvious, of course), the sex was excellent without going into too much detail that distracted from the actual participants, and while short the length was very much appropriate for what is ultimately a side story. Excellent work.

Also, because I'm lazy, please apply all of the above points (except the comment about the length, because I very much want to read more) to Apples After Midnight as well, as all that I like about this applies to it as well.
GW chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
All fics should be like this. All of them. Make more, please and thank you~
Sky-Pirate-Tat chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
This was amazing. I knew you could do it! 3 I really liked how you wrote them, I think you have the two spot on for personality. I also liked how you mixed the porn in with some chuckles. :3 It reminds us that this fic, though kinky is still set in AT.
Kid chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
...well damn...I have no words to explain how awesome that was...can we get some more?
taeyeons chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
This. Is. Perfection.
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