Reviews for The Hollow Shark Fox
Monster King chapter 5 . 12/23/2017
Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story.
snorlax285 chapter 5 . 12/8/2017
Awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
when Naruto took his lover own frilmy out he took the money form them and the he meet with ten ten say to her you my sex toy now gril and she then sheep in in bed with him with her big size bodds out to him now and saying gril you hot now and it time for sex now and he do it with her on top on him and big size dick into her now Naruto then put her boods to his mothed now and then he had sarkra ion chind to the wall of his home now some of the hyuuga clan ex slvers grils woking with him now , and then some time Naruto get a war like bicker buit up he took form the warcife hoder guop he took out and kill off ,a elf gril is Naruto new wife and Queen now .
Animefreak347346 chapter 3 . 9/20/2017
Just realized that they're cousins sooo... Karin's lil crush is a bit...
doubledamn chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Oh crap. Kami's been hanging out with Zeus again.
Mariusz1988 chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
Woaw, this story is ... wow. Awesome work. A fitting end for the rats nest that konoha became. CERO ! hahahah Thx for your work.
Yurushimo The Forgiving Dragon chapter 3 . 6/23/2017
ahh, the times when nothing was overly offensive. You ccould call anything gay. I miss those times...
Alice-In-Chains chapter 5 . 6/4/2017
thanks for this story, it was short compared to what I am used to however it was well written and quite frankly flowed quite well.

Overall I would say
categoryRank/starsTotal Possible Rank/stars
Story: 2.5 out of 5
flow/feel of the story: 4 out of 5
dialog/interactions: 3.5 out of 5
grammar: 3 out of 5
Overall: 3 out of 5

the story was amusing and one of the few I am happy to say that was not a waste of my time in reading it as I quite enjoyed it. the only things that had me slightly sad is I hoped that only his/her base form would be male and the transformation would be still female for shits and giggles, and lastly I am quite disappointed by how much you made him/her still hold onto the rules/laws/suggestions that Aizen who betrayed him/her... seems illogical
Guest chapter 5 . 6/1/2017
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2017
Don't listen to assholes like them there just jealous
kuraitja chapter 4 . 5/11/2017
and we all learned a lesson: PAPERWORK ALWAYS WINS!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/15/2017
I loved you writing! Honestly I haven't seen anybody write this before. Your writing is great, your ideas are fantastic, so ignore the haters and keep it up! ;)
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 1/15/2017
Ch 4 Even As Arcanar Tia Harrubel The Justice was served . More were saved and the hearth Also fine so everything is Ok .
Nihatclodra chapter 5 . 12/20/2016
You know what would be interesting? A fanfic like this where Naruto is Starrk, and Kyuubi is Lilynette.

You gotta admit, it makes sense.
amenoshimai1 chapter 5 . 11/14/2016
God he's kids are gonna be so damn lucky!, having either the Hyuga's Byakugan or the Uzumaki Chakra Chains...
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