Reviews for Unmentionable
Sxyblondgrl95 chapter 32 . 2/22/2013
Loved this story! You write buffy and spike so well! I loved that you didnt have them falling in love over night...that it took time and they were friends first. Amazing!
bip.pib.1 chapter 32 . 2/12/2013
Good story, I really liked it :-) I also read Uncontrollable and I especially liked how you managed to build a relation between two mortal ennemies in a very convincing way ! I got a bit distracted from the Spuffy story by the other pairs, and I didn't quite understand how S&B could talk sooooo much (and so serious stuff) while engaged in heavy bed activities :-). I am looking forward to other stories !
Bamboo Angel chapter 32 . 1/11/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. After reading Uncontrollable I was a little concerned about starting to read the sequel - it was left in such a beautifully hopeful and ambiguous place, and I didn't think that Unmentionable could ever live up to that, but it absolutely did. It was a pleasure to watch he developing relationships - Spike and Buffy, of course, but also Willow and Tara, Xander and Anya, even Giles and Joyce to some extent. I love the new world hat you have created for them, where love really does overcome all obstacles if you're prepared to fight hard enough for it.
Bamboo Angel chapter 30 . 1/11/2013
Aw, Xander. He can be so immature a lot of the time, bu when he comes through for his friends, he REALLY comes through for them.
Bamboo Angel chapter 19 . 1/8/2013
"Slayer strong and Buffy beautiful." I like that.
Bamboo Angel chapter 14 . 1/7/2013
*Sniffles* A sweet and beautiful chapter ending. So nice to see them making each other a happy ending, even if it's not the one that either of them were looking for.
Bamboo Angel chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
I love Willow so much right now - more than usual even. Given her own history with Spike, she has every reason to be freaking out that her best friend is "crazy glue bonding" with him, but she's being all sweet and supportive, and trying to keep the freaking to a minimum.
kasumi.EFP chapter 32 . 1/5/2013
Here I am. I liked the final part and the epilogue very much! _
I'm very interested in reading other stories of yours but I'm sorry I can't do it soon. I have to resume my fictions and the translations!
(I see you keep on writing "an offer you can't refuse"! I will be there when I'll be less busy, I promise! :)
You're a very good writer :)
kasumi.EFP chapter 30 . 1/5/2013
I definitely loved this chapter! All of it!
kasumi.EFP chapter 29 . 1/4/2013
I want more Joyce and Giles! *.*
And.. err.. Spike is the key? As Dawn was the key in the tv shows? O.O What a bright and original idea!
kasumi.EFP chapter 25 . 1/4/2013
Aww.. Joyce speaking so sweetly about Giles! *.*
And I like these chapter. You did a very good work on studying the psychological attitude of all the characters. You took the scenes from the tv series and worked with them, played with them, showing a great skill to develop scenes and messages.
It's a hard work and you should be careful to dose it, to not sound heavy.
My compliments! _
Kathryn Merlin chapter 32 . 1/3/2013
Finally finished! Wow. I don't even know where to start. What an adventure. So I'll just say two things: my favorite scene was the one with Giles and Joyce and Hank, and that your version of Restless was PHENOMENAL. I was blown away by it. And a couple days after I had finished that section I heard the song "Awake My Soul" by Mumford and Sons and it totally reminded me of it. You should listen to it if you haven't already. And a question: on the master list you gave me it says the next one in this series is incomplete. Do you when it will be finished? If it's a long time from now I'd rather wait until it's all done.
kasumi.EFP chapter 23 . 1/3/2013
The story keeps to be good :) I really love the amusing moments! And the moment she went in the hospital to thank Riley... Yes, I think she is so like that. She owed it to him, even if he acted like such a jerk to her.
But I don't understand the italic parts when it's mentioned Sineya and other ancient forces. Are the ancient powers being awake by the spell? Do they want to fight Spike?
And what Riley thought, when he said he want Spike to leave town and leave her?
There are many hints ready to be developed in the next chapters :) I can't wait to find out :)
kasumi.EFP chapter 17 . 12/29/2012
LOL, the final part is too amusing!
Good chapter, I like how you built it. Even if the part with Riley and Adam talking in the lab is slower than the others, but I liked their philosophical conversation.
I liked very much the part with Riley's escape too :)
Suzanne chapter 32 . 12/27/2012
Read the whole thing in a couple of days and am overwhelmed. Wow. Just great. You managed to write not only a great love story with mucho mush and smut, but also you made it a whole story, i.e. one that has all the Scoobies in it, and even Riley and Angel. And I think you all do them justice, in a way. I loved it how you take your time, how you let the characters develop and learn. A great read"
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