|Reviews for Pokemon: Pride and Prestige|
| clarinet97 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This is pretty good! The only thing I noticed was that you connected phrases with "..." like "Suddenly his family pet Exploud walks in the room...It stands next to Chet and suddenly lets out a big yelp right in the ear of the young boy...Chet jumps up and lands on the floor...After a couple of groans and moans, he staggers to his feet...He first gives a blank stare at Exploud before looking at the alarm clock
Instead of connecting them like that, try using commas, or punctuation marks to separate them. But really, this was a very good read, and I can't wait to read more!
| Dusk chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This is actually really good. Your really detailed. It's interesting, exciting and involves Mudkip. It's really good.
| Killer of thy Cookies chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I've been looking for good "Pokemon adventure" stories. I hope this one fits my expectations. I'll be following this story and see what you've got.
If you don't mind, I would appreciate you taking the time to read my Pokemon stories as well. Thanks in advance.
~Killer of thy Cookies