Reviews for Early Bird
Rachel Garber chapter 86 . 2/19/2014
That was a great story sorry I am not good at reviews think of me as the reviewer equivalent of "I'm not good at writing summaries" author I just really thought it was Jazz, but wasn't 100% sure, still wondering why Edward's self-confidence issues weren't brought out more but all in all a great story, loved the one where Esme caught them in their office. Just worried that Jazz would get fired for shtupping one of his team.
Rachel Garber chapter 83 . 2/19/2014
That sounds nice Cullen-Whitlock very proud of our boys very nice story
rachel garber chapter 82 . 2/19/2014
I hope we are going to find out what was behind Edward's sleep problems I was expecting a hateful parent thing what happened to this poor man to have such a low opinionof himself will it be revealed, great story little bit scary at first in Insomnia I was sure this was going to "end badly" as Bella said in Twilight
Rachel Garber chapter 78 . 2/19/2014
Wow that was close, I hope that that little bit of standing up to Esme helps Edward's self-confidence
Rachel Garber chapter 77 . 2/19/2014
Omg, oh geez she is going to catch them with their pants down
Rachel Garber chapter 76 . 2/19/2014
Bwahahahahaha footage for the security guys well that's hot in fact fuck hawt, pretty boys loving each other very hawt
Rachel Garber chapter 75 . 2/19/2014
That was very sweet, though I suspect that there is still trouble brewing in paradise, Edward still hasn't confronted his demons yet. But here is my song for my boys, "I was born to love with every beat of my hear, Yes I was born to take care of you every single day of my life. You are the one for me, I am the man for you You were made for me You are my ecstasy..." Queen "I Was Born To Love You
Rachel Garber chapter 72 . 2/19/2014
What is security going to do except snicker over what they see, Edward is cousin to the owners of company and I bet Paul scolds him because as we know Paul is very discreet, lol
Rachel garber chapter 62 . 2/19/2014
Now I am nervous, will he open up or use evasive tactics
Rachel Garber chapter 61 . 2/19/2014
This was amazing, glad Edward capitulated that he is going to take a chance with Jasper. he knows Jaspers words to be true
Rachel Garber chapter 60 . 2/19/2014
I know it was important to write down all his thoughts, just hope he lets Jazz in, he is so worth it and he has a right to love and be loved. Baby boy, you have to let your man back in or you will break his heart more than all your fuckery.
Rachel Garber chapter 58 . 2/19/2014
Uhhh, no I didn't actually, because it confimed my darkest fears that something is seriously broken in baby boy,
Rachel Garber chapter 57 . 2/19/2014
I knew it I knew it I knew it this isn't plain insomnia, this is soul destroyed pain someone hurt him so he feels beyond repair not worth it.
Rachel Garber chapter 56 . 2/19/2014
Wow well I knew something was up with baby boy, and now how is he going to react to Jasper's declaration of love
Rachel Garber chapter 54 . 2/19/2014
He decamped he knows that Jazz didn't know how badly things went down and he had to have his last time with Jazz before he disappeared except he has Jake and he can't leave the dog alone, so maybe he is holed up in his apt this is freaking me out
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