Reviews for Countdown To Extinction
Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
nice chapter :D

Kind of an anticlimatic ending, expected some cheers and celebrations but eh. Main point is, he's dead. For now...
Restrained.Freedom chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
Ah... the taste of victory is sweet indeed.

Well done.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
The mental assault by the re-animated Galby is rather formidable.
Why did the combined minds of M&T and the ra'zac suddenly disappear when Murt spoke to Galby?
squirrel0304 chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
Did you update? The date was wrong. It's good to see you writing again if you are.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
Holy cow!
Sorry I missed this chapter.
I have to say it was a full one. I appreciate that you touched a bit on the history of things, for otherwise I might not be able to retain all the twists and turns that this story has taken. And it was done in a very flowing way.
I was surprised about Katrina's outburst, but she is probably suffering a bit of PTSS.
Great chapter.
Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 10 . 10/8/2012
This... is rather good. :D

I like the Norse mythology twist on it too and the plot's pretty well done. It's dynamic at least, and plods along well. nice.

I'm a bit confused on Galbatorix, is he still around and kicking, or dead and done by Angvard (which is an epicly cool name by the way XD)?

Also, glad Arya's coming back. didn't like how Odrin was perving on her... douchebag. maybe you should also stop... s*xing her up so much, not trying to be rude, but it seems whenever we come to her, there's always some sort of perverted view point or something about her beauty. how about some more action with her? like when she comes back to Eragon, etc. That is what's happening right...?

good stuff again, keep it up. :) (also, as a general query, is this all action/adventure or do you plan on introducing any new genre's to it like some humour/romance? I'm not saying it's dead boring or anything, just a general query.)
Restrained.Freedom chapter 9 . 9/11/2012
I was so ticked at Eragon and his quest to put his brother to right... and you fixed him good by having Murty turn the tables on him and fixed Eragon's issues instead.
and now what will happen with Voriadd?...
Restrained.Freedom chapter 8 . 9/1/2012
Always fun to seen Eragon exposed for the bigot that he is...
And I am glad to see the ra'zac brothers reunited... but I'd like to know more about how that happened.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
Happy anniversary.

Dag this thing keeps getting deeper, and after all this time I still don't see a light at the end of the tunnel for the good guys...

Murtagh is back and sleeping nicely, and I am happy for him an Thorn {even though they have yet to communicate at all.}

But other than that, even the win in this chapter is laced with the doom of the proximity of the poison...

Part of me wants to know what happens, an another part just figures it will be another bought of gore and death... but Glaedr? Really? You turned a dragon spirit to the dark side?

Restrained.Freedom chapter 6 . 2/5/2012

"Keep battering the gates, or we shall throw you over them..."


Wow! This was an exciting chapter to be sure. It is completely ironic that every dead will only enlargen the enemies armies while depleting their own.

The deadMurtagh saving Eragon just so he could end him himself was fabulous. Will the returnedMurtagh recall that event? How hilarious for his evil actions to virtually make him into a hero of sorts. LMAO
Restrained.Freedom chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
I can just see Brom chastising Eragon to 'be good' for the gods...

Restrained.Freedom chapter 4 . 12/15/2011
I am very happy for Thorn... My only bit of confusion is how the good guys managed to win against the forces with their own numbers dwindles as they were... I want them to win... but I want to understand why they were able to {when they were utterly destroyed before} and be able to believe it as well...
Restrained.Freedom chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
Feedback... hmm...

{and you know you have yet to read or review any of my stories... but here goes...}


Your story gets grimmer and more hopeless as you go... Just as it looks like Eragon is about to get a bit of luck, Saphi meets her end...

I would say that I am reading this in hope... but I have lost hope... My reading is inspired by simple curiosity... What can you do with a dragonless rider, his ghostly father and a horde of undead?...
Restrained.Freedom chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
Book 4... I was disappointed

Alright... Eragon said his name and did what exactly?... Is this the RoK? And is Eragon off to raise the varden dead?
Thorns Father chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Why are the words in my story all squished together? It's not at all like that in the document, what the hell? Sorry, but it's me, I just couldn't log in!
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