Reviews for The CheckIn Desk
agoogoo chapter 2 . 4/10
ironic Edward actually was a suucide. While poor Bella wasn't. Here was can see the loopholes(?) in the legal system (and whatever systems). Sad
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 2/10
What an original concept this story was. Thanks for sharing
Kelly chapter 2 . 4/6/2017
It was extraordinary. I don't know if it was your goal, but the story was very funny. In fact, it had everything: comedy, horror, romance, sarcasm, feminism, spirituality... hard to mention everything. Very very creative, on top of that. I wonder what happens in this mind of yours. Thanks for the fic. Have a nice day!
peggie63 chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
Great story, very original. Thank you.
ffictionreader01 chapter 2 . 2/10/2017
I love this little story, but I have questions. Why did Edward get the nice house? why was Bella's death classed as suicide?
4blueeyes9 chapter 2 . 1/12/2017
This was a nice story, I really liked it!
lamelurker chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
Nice idea. Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
sholtsclaw698 chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
loved it the first time, and loved it this time :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
I really enjoyed your story, what a different point of view of eternity. Hope you do continue this story! Great job!
RogueAlly chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
I'm so glad I gave this a shot. I thought I'd read most of the non-AH Twilight fix out there, so I'm thrilled that you reposted since I might not have gone back so far to search. This is such an interesting twist to the Bella-really-died-cliff-diving trope. I absolutely love what you did here.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
So original!
Ayina11 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
I wish you could make it longer. Love it!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
Great one shot. Hope you write more fics
William Francies Reisen-Newman chapter 2 . 11/1/2016
I like the new version
Booklover345 chapter 2 . 10/31/2016
Omg, I loved this! It would be so awesome if you eventually did a bunch of Outtakes.
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