Reviews for Variations of Fate: Shattered Past
StargateFFWriter chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
nice idea to explain one of the alternate reality scenarios in Daedelus Variations

nicely devised Ancient-sounding name Falka and Athosian-sounding name Doral

I'm deducing that Falka and Doral had some feelings for each other?

I do wanna point out that as Moros doesn't think too highly of the humans' characteristics, I find it surprising that he would allow them to guard one of their colonies. The Athosians being exposed to Ancient technologies explains well how they might've developed such advanced technologies like the Fire-Starter, altho they could've achieved that advanced tech-level by themselves. too.
BMick chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
This one is going to stay with me awhile, most of all for the portrait of the Lanteans in the time of their fall: desperate struggle combined with almost unbelief that it could be happening, that they could be losing the war. Also, the varied attitudes toward their human "seedlings", some valuing them more than others, fits with what we've seen and intuited from what was left behind.