Reviews for Unexpected Chase
GLee68 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
oh wow...

unique and incredible!


I thoroughly enjoyed the concept AND the delivery... really well done!
Tdot TwiFic chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
LOVE IT. I had a dream of a plot idea very similar to this. Weird. It was so perfectly matched for me that I can't believe it is only a one shot.
Monkey22marie chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I loved it just wish it was a full length story
Cina's chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Omg I loved this story. Thank you for sharing.
ParasiteGoddess chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I really enjoyed this.
MEL24FAN chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I love that Bella had the upper hand. A feisty Bella is so much more fun. I thought it was cute that she wanted him to chase her but he got one over on her in the end.
tonerlady chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
This would make a cool story. Would love to hear more about her creation and Charlie and renee. Especially Alice finding her and then more interaction with family. Pretty sexy story, especially Bella, well, and of course Edward.
fcat5761 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
very cool idea and story!
kneon chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Cute story liked the twists.
timidvampire chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
really enjoyed this x
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Wow what an awesome story. Very cool! Thank you
Agrable chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Loved it!
A-SuperStar13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Great job, I loved a supermatural Bella. It was a great read.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
I loved it so good and different thank you
lilsunnysaunt chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Very interesting. I love when you make Bella supernatural too, and different from Edward. This was excellent. And such a creative and natural thing for them to do for a wedding anniversary. The twist of Bella's blood bringing the green back to Edward's eyes. Very cool effect. Thanks for sharing!
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