|Reviews for Unexpected Chase|
| OCDE chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
I really liked everything after the ten year thing. A lot. :)
| sellabella chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
A fun and different take. Loved it.
| shaqbarcalis chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Fantastic story I would love this to be a full length story! It sucked me right in very original too! Loved it!
| Isao84 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Interesting plot. Have you thought about continuing it? I like the changes in E with B's blood. Her abillities maybe you can do more, with another one from the facility?
| MissRe chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Well, I'm glad that you had internet today. This was a fun little treat for Halloween. Thank you! I really enjoyed this. I think the Bella you created was fun and unique. I loved that they didn't want to be alone and found a way to be with each other. It kinda reminds me of a quote from one of my sci-fi series - chased her, he did. Chased her til she caught him. I loved the chase and that they haven't let that part of their relationship go. Amazing work!
| maggiejoma chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
loved it... thank you...:)
| ldenny chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I love it, something new and different from the fics I normally read. I have never read one like this, great job...any chance for more of this Bella and Edward?
| magmom2 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I loved it.
| rubell chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
hahahahaha...what a wonderful twist!
| Veronique24 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Very well done - loved it!
| dinotopian chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Lovely! Thank you!
| seriouslyaddicted chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Awwww! I like this one. It was good
| rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
So completely unexpected. I love it!
| Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
This was an interesting story. i'd love to see it expanded into a multi chapter, there were so many things mentioned I wanted to learn more about ...her parents, where she was kept, what she was and what she was changed into...all of it! Lol :) thanks for sharing!
| trixielou chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Great one shot. I love the twist with Bella.
Thanks for sharing your work with us.