|Reviews for The last gulp of air, the fall of a warlord|
| dizzydani777 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
| Demented Ookami Hime chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Yeah, you need to proofread your story and fix it. Please and thank you.
| watch who you piss off chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
ha ha ha Madara.
| The KumiKo chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I like it!