Reviews for The Next Great Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wah this is sooooo good plz plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had forgotten this story. it is really engaging |
![]() ![]() Update please...! Please author-san...! |
![]() ![]() Wow, what a reward! Handed over to murdering torturing psychopaths to be used as cannon fodder. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is also the fact that he can’t immediately speak the language. He can shapeshift his entire body but the Fates can’t instantly give him access to a language? My suspension of disbelief was shot to hell by this scene. The Hokage knowing about his arrival? Shot, I tell you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right away, there are a lot of weird inconsistencies. Why didn’t he just kill himself right off the bat if he wanted to die? Why didn’t the Fates set him up with a family to even make a pass at giving him a better life? His situation at the Dursleys was probably better than Konoha at his current age. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY DOES EVERY NARUTO CROSSOVER FIC START WITH A VISIT TO THE T&I!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit... the snake guy know's about harry, rip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like harry is adapting... ya kakashi really needs something to keep him from living in the past. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems odd that luna could be harry's magical anything, tbh... they aren't even that close as friends, lol. Feelsbad that hermione didn't get a second chance in life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() rip harry, always fates bitch |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a nice story to read. Thank you for sharing. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see Luna as an owl or a creature of her invention. Curious what you choose though :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story so far I just don’t like how Luna is now the older sibling |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is he being a retard and still trying his spells even though the fucking fates literally told him it was going to be different? |