Aww, last update is 2011

ahhahahh dont have a connection to a madman? harry sadly you do he a snake loving sadist

he realises that the uzumaki and senju while their bloodline was selective it varied and they had subbloodlines. uzumaki main one was their large reserve which allowed extended life charka chains sensor and sealing . senju had large reserves..strength more ease with charka nature[wood, water] and medic cause of it. he should just say elemental control is his bloodline..he not wrong... i mean most of the shield spells or contego or just in general could be explained away via elements. and it easier if he slips up or just have him say transfig or transmutation is the bloodline ...plus harry you are already under a shit ton of scrutiny. he can be both a medic and a frontline fighter...tsunade is a badass afterall so harry now has his own spy network? hahhah

ohh harry kakashi and the gang told you you were genin level so of course fresh students and what they learn would be something you already know ...you got blinded by it been school that you didnt think it through , flying fox or flying squirrel or a extinct animal cause hey it luna and she see creatures that ''don't'' exist...or a animal that seems to be unable ot fly but cause it A luna B an anime they can

harry and temari would be interesting. sort of in the vein of either fleur and harry or susan bones sort of.
same with harry tenten sort of like ginny and harry
harry and either fu or yugito nii
harry and shizuka

oh god luna and anko teaming up...add naruto and have harry embrace his maurader side and...the village is doomed ...danzo is fucked...jiyra is screwed...hizuen is goign to have a heart attack...kakashi going to non-stop laugh madly
so who yakushi-san the nurse or the head medic? you have the head medic ask yakushi a quesiton only for the hyuuga to look at the head medic and ask him a quesiton while implying he is yakushi-san

why is he pushing it? doesnt he know that can only lead to pain and nothign good?lazy slacker ron is shikamaru, hermione? hinata or tenten maybe lee? neville would be hinata and naruto ginny sakura sheamus sasuke with a mix of kiba , one who loves to eat ron choji

wouldnt he already know it a new world? the fates told him he going to a new dimension why harry freaking out so much he 19 in mind but not in body he in a new world new dimension with its own rules..and way of doing things of course he wouldn't be able to do magic how he has been taught.. i thought the fates took most of his memories of the war, why does he think he can save everyone that he has to? he cant, he to inexperienced to untrained to young...it silly oh god if harry keeps forcing his magic he going to be in so much pain

interesting
harry been put under the torture curse so he has been tortured before

isnt harry been a little hypocritcal with the weird outfits considering what wizard wear? so harry younger then naruto? also why were they caught unaware during a time of war? and why didnt they use loyalty oaths or the like to ensure there could be no spies? it just seems like something harry would do cause he suffered at the hands of a spy of the old order...
i mean it war why would you not be ready for anything ...and why would you not fight back with everything you have instead of just stun and capture, like they do in canon

nope. I'm done. I cant read more of random people showing up to explain mystical bullshit in the most boring way possible.

some of the idea's your trying to explain are interesting, but harry as a character isn't making decisions, or learning about it, or discovering information.

he's sitting there without moving, and barely asking questions while whatever thinly veiled exposition character tells him things. most of those things have little plot relevance to whatever future plot may happen

if you write another fic after this, (which you should, even if there are parts I dont like you should keep writing) you should focus on more nuanced character interaction

"Oh, I had forgotten, you have a soft spot for wolves, don't you?" is one of the most painfully stunted lines of dialogue I have ever read.

the worst part is, if you amended it a bit, referenced kakashi's plethora of nin dogs, the idea would make sense, but to just say it like that, with zero inflection? that wasn't gai talking, that was the author spitting more exposition in my face. its almost insulting

regardless, as long as the author had fun writing it, my opinion doesn't really matter here, so I'll stop bashing the writing

I'm gonna push past this, but there is nothing more boring or poorly written as these reincarnation fanfic that start with a god explaining everything to the character directly. it's the most lazy exposition dump possible for this kind of story, and it often doesn't actually matter at all to the later story.

it is infinitely more interesting to see a character figure it out, than some god stand in explaining everything for a whole chapter.

I Love it. Any update?

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!