Verry good story
Hope for the next chapter
Good luck

Please update

This is a great story and I LOVE Harry really...
but, y'know, I just find it unpleasant that you make it so that Kakashi is so acceptable of Harry's presence and being a proper, responsible and caring guardian for him but incapable of even looking after Naruto from the shadow...

I mean, seriously, Kakashi owe so much to Minato and Kushina so it kinda seem illogical somehow that if he's mentally stable enough to be so compassionate towards Harry who had no ties whatsoever to him before and still be incapable to sneakily look after Naruto (council be damned, he's an elite jounin for gods sake!) prior to Harry's presence in his life!

And then there's also the fact that Kakashi became Harry's jonin sensei. Which is impossible since Kakashi practically adopt him as his child. That's illogical because of their close relationship. Putting people with such close relation outside the team in one team is just asking for trouble and blatant favouritism. Which is why they don't do it. If you had wanted Harry to be Kakashi's apprentice, you should have just done so from the start...

So, yeah, your story have potential but there are just too many loopholes that I find make the story a tad illogical in my opinion but hey, everyone's entitled to have their own opinion and fanfiction exist for the sake of our whimsical imagination so...*shrug

This fic is one of the best HPxNaruto crossovers I've come across. I'm glad Harry has a proper support structure and that the ninja in this form of the fic seem more aware of the necessity of interpersonal support. I also like the hurt/comfort/mentor relationships that are going on, though I am quite looking forward to seeing Hari grow as a Ninja. Not a big Danzo fan, so am hoping that he eventually gets his just desserts. I'm really hoping Harry is not irreversibly maimed; a previous crossover that had Kakashi raising him also had him dying with his growth stunted and not really getting to grow up. I'd be disappointed if this ended up following that format... though I don't get the impression that that will be the case. Thanks for writing and thanks for sharing it with us!

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I’m happy Luna is marrying someone she knows and cares for, but I still want Harry to kick Danzo’s head clean off his body for that manipulation.

I am in love with this story! Can’t wait for more!

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awe man. im so sad I finished this the day I started. its super good and I lool foreward to more.

Have Luna’s form be a Nargle or something that’d be interesting. Or a hummingbird, maybe even a owl

Great story, please keep updating. :-)

18 chapters... you did so well for 18 chapters and had me on the edge of my seat reading your story, not a fanfic but a story that is how much praise I would give you!

Then you put him in the same team as someone who got his ass handed to him and is still arrogant... I can already see where this is going now and am disappointed. Thanks for the journey up till now, it was interesting until you fell into this cliche team composition.

Love the story so far please Continue writing it I enjoy reading it

I like this a lot, hope you continue. Cheers.

I just wanna say, I remember reading this fic as a freshman in HS back in 2011, so thanks for not abandoning or deleting this fic.