|Reviews for The Next Great Adventure|
| jenniebennie chapter 24 . 7/14
this is great, how have I never found this story before. update soon please
| rebecca85 chapter 17 . 7/12
Hello, hi, um. I'm not sure if you're still writing this story, but as a yarner, there was a context error I noticed: Luna crochets, but then lowers her needles. Erm, you use a crochet hook to crochet (just one at a time) and you use knitting needles to knit (always two or more). So you're mixing two crafts here.
Just wanted to point that out...
Also, I think I've read this story once before, in its original form. Or at least the plotline seems very familiar. But anyway, at that time the story was a little ehh. Not bad, but not good either. A little disappointing. This time though, I'm really glad I decided to give it a second chance! This time, it's really good! I don't feel uncomfortable with inaccuracies or plotholes or the storyline, now this is a pleasure to read. I can just lean back and enjoy it, which is amazing.
Ah. The only weird thing was Harry's start of school. He started a couple of weeks into April, which was portrayed as weird. Except that school in Japan (and presumably in the Naruto-verse) starts on April 1st...
I hope you're doing well, and have a great summer!
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/3
Why is Luna not a crumple horned snorkack? If she can go to an anime ninja universe, she can become a crumple horned snorkack, author.
| Ashtar De Kerl chapter 24 . 3/31
Verry good story
Hope for the next chapter
| Kristina Johnson chapter 24 . 3/27
| Yozora Haru chapter 24 . 3/23
This is a great story and I LOVE Harry really...
but, y'know, I just find it unpleasant that you make it so that Kakashi is so acceptable of Harry's presence and being a proper, responsible and caring guardian for him but incapable of even looking after Naruto from the shadow...
I mean, seriously, Kakashi owe so much to Minato and Kushina so it kinda seem illogical somehow that if he's mentally stable enough to be so compassionate towards Harry who had no ties whatsoever to him before and still be incapable to sneakily look after Naruto (council be damned, he's an elite jounin for gods sake!) prior to Harry's presence in his life!
And then there's also the fact that Kakashi became Harry's jonin sensei. Which is impossible since Kakashi practically adopt him as his child. That's illogical because of their close relationship. Putting people with such close relation outside the team in one team is just asking for trouble and blatant favouritism. Which is why they don't do it. If you had wanted Harry to be Kakashi's apprentice, you should have just done so from the start...
So, yeah, your story have potential but there are just too many loopholes that I find make the story a tad illogical in my opinion but hey, everyone's entitled to have their own opinion and fanfiction exist for the sake of our whimsical imagination so...*shrug
| Aryia Lexi Sevorus chapter 24 . 2/22
This fic is one of the best HPxNaruto crossovers I've come across. I'm glad Harry has a proper support structure and that the ninja in this form of the fic seem more aware of the necessity of interpersonal support. I also like the hurt/comfort/mentor relationships that are going on, though I am quite looking forward to seeing Hari grow as a Ninja. Not a big Danzo fan, so am hoping that he eventually gets his just desserts. I'm really hoping Harry is not irreversibly maimed; a previous crossover that had Kakashi raising him also had him dying with his growth stunted and not really getting to grow up. I'd be disappointed if this ended up following that format... though I don't get the impression that that will be the case. Thanks for writing and thanks for sharing it with us!
| Fallow57 chapter 24 . 2/7
XxXx Kudos xXxX : )
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/3
I’m happy Luna is marrying someone she knows and cares for, but I still want Harry to kick Danzo’s head clean off his body for that manipulation.
| Demonica-Death chapter 24 . 11/1/2020
I am in love with this story! Can’t wait for more!
| Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 24 . 9/29/2020
Welcome to the Good Story Basket
| prominently late chapter 24 . 9/28/2020
awe man. im so sad I finished this the day I started. its super good and I lool foreward to more.
| Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 11 . 9/28/2020
Have Luna’s form be a Nargle or something that’d be interesting. Or a hummingbird, maybe even a owl
| Boika chapter 24 . 9/17/2020
Great story, please keep updating. :-)
| Brandon Boodoo chapter 18 . 9/10/2020
18 chapters... you did so well for 18 chapters and had me on the edge of my seat reading your story, not a fanfic but a story that is how much praise I would give you!
Then you put him in the same team as someone who got his ass handed to him and is still arrogant... I can already see where this is going now and am disappointed. Thanks for the journey up till now, it was interesting until you fell into this cliche team composition.