Reviews for The Next Great Adventure
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 10 . 1/13/2020
Does Harry skip a grade or two? Because you've been pointing that out a lot, lol.
Nemhain2009 chapter 23 . 1/7/2020
Great story! I’m looking forward to reading more!
ChaoticInscriber chapter 23 . 1/4/2020
Well, if no one is supplying a blow by blow description of the fight, the important parts are the shield (already witnessed once wasn't it?), and the cutting curse at the end, where the most notable and important damage inflicted is. And can't the edge of a physical shield cut into what it strikes? So why not have it be possible to adapt a similar technique by effectively "reorienting" it? Or so it could be explained or implied. Also any supreme defense technique/ability should be trained and refined to also gain some form of offense, and vice-versa, as a matter of pragmatism, so why wouldn't their bloodline include some form of possible attack when it's proven to include an impressive shielding component?
Mentioning how the guy was presuming the fight to not be very troublesome until it was, because unknown kid versus jonin, might help, again if avoiding a full blow by blow. Let them assume that effect lasted longer than it did, even if he realized from the sparks that he wasn't completely helpless that doesn't mean he bothered to go all out, just got less hesitant about killing a kid. Can even mention that being saved from being bisected is why he remembered his bloodline was an option - leaves some implied emphasis and reliance on the shield, and it's a common enough rookie mistake to forget some of your options in a real fight when you haven't been in many he's just lucky his was one that could still save his butt despite that. Include that he realized he wasn't fast enough to hit the enemy from range with his techniques, that he consciously took the risk of getting clipped to be close enough to get that key shot in and was lucky it worked so well in time to not-kill him. A necessity, since he had no way to know how long Kakashi would take and couldn't rely on stalling for time.

It's a good thing the only witness to the full fight was the now-dead guy. Lots of leeway to work with. I love how Kakashi is handling all of this. So far he's being an excellent mentor.
(And if he's got his head on straight, he's an excellent person to relate to a conscripted child soldier and war veteran, like Harry!)
Guest chapter 23 . 1/3/2020
Goodness me I hope harry tells the council to stuff it. Like seriously nothing peeved me off more than trying to force marriage on to someone in fics
Guest chapter 17 . 1/3/2020
Love your story! I think it's a realistic, well as realistic as fiction can get, take on how things are progressing. The only thing I can think to say is that perhaps a little consistency in terms of Harry's skills. For example, he's mentioned that Sasuke is better at Taijutsu than him becuase of his reach but also that even then they were pretty evenly matched. However, when it came to fighting at the academy, he seemed to take note that he needed to fight smart and use his speed and that's okay but if Sasuke and he are noted to be about evenly matched when they first fought against Kakashi, and the fact they've been training and sparing since and have improved and Kakashi has said they are already genin level, then I dont see how he would have even a little trouble fighting a civilian bully, even if he was good at taijutsu.
Kaito Echizen chapter 23 . 1/3/2020
Mmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat
Lilybud chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
That you for the update, i honestly wasn't expecting it
Phoenix chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
This story is quite interesting thanks for writing it
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
Uf de la que se salvo harry
Joe Fenton chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
Always happy to see a new chapter. Harry has been a ninja long enough he almost forgot he was still a wizard. :)

At least by now being required to at least let the Hokage and Kakashi in on the secret, he can work on that. They can probably help him disguise his magic as jutsu.
SkylerHollow chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
Thanks for the chapter. Curious on what way this will go, honestly feel the Hokage shouldn't have any info of Harry's bloodline on paper... Also am curious on how Kakashi is going to react when Harry points out that there are very few limits on what magic can do :P...
HNovion chapter 23 . 12/31/2019
Yas! I have waited for this!
drkprince chapter 3 . 12/31/2019
what a fckng waste of digital space
R. A Cross chapter 23 . 12/31/2019
Thanks for the chapter.
Advance Happy New Year~
LoveFanFictionForLife chapter 23 . 12/31/2019
So cool! Awesome job!
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