Reviews for The Next Great Adventure
myafroatemydog chapter 21 . 5/8/2018
Pretty excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 20 . 5/8/2018
This was an excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 19 . 5/8/2018
I figured he would be the apprentice. This was a great chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 18 . 5/8/2018
This was an excellent chapter.
myafroatemydog chapter 17 . 5/7/2018
Pretty excellent chapter!
myafroatemydog chapter 16 . 5/7/2018
This was an excellent chapter.
myafroatemydog chapter 15 . 5/7/2018
Pretty great chapter.
Nobody Smurf chapter 22 . 5/7/2018
Danzo's little ploy makes my blood boil, but that applies to most of what he does. I would cheerfully call down Exterminatus on my own position if he was in the line of fire.
I hope Genma is able to deal with the huge target on his back from this. Unless this was somehow Just as Planned.
Hiromi is such a brat. Hari better be careful, or her father might try to set them up.

Thank you.
TimothyB chapter 22 . 5/7/2018
Love the story. Hope Harry stays straight for once. Would be interesting to see who you pair him up with since he is so young. Keep up the amazing work!
myafroatemydog chapter 14 . 5/7/2018
This was an excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 13 . 5/7/2018
Pretty great chapter. Maybe Harry is a defensive ninja.
myafroatemydog chapter 12 . 5/7/2018
This was an excellent chapter. Harry and a gem haku or temari or fuu
myafroatemydog chapter 11 . 5/7/2018
Excellent chapter.
myafroatemydog chapter 10 . 5/7/2018
Pretty excellent chapter. Each chapter it gets better
myafroatemydog chapter 9 . 5/7/2018
Pretty great chapter
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