Reviews for The Next Great Adventure
dead.but.true chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
The HPSS confused me at first, but then I remembered that the American title was "HP and the Sorcerer's Stone" instead of...] Philosopher's Stone" because the American publisher thought that the title was "too complicated for children" and wouldn't sell.
Seere Klein chapter 15 . 8/13/2017
Oh my gosh i know this us wrong but this SasukexHari bonding is making me ship them wtf
ADemonInATeacup chapter 21 . 8/9/2017
I love your book! It is such an amazing, unique idea and I can't wait for more! 3 Hope you update soon.
BlankCanvas624 chapter 21 . 8/6/2017
That brat Hitomi, I srsly hate her. I hope she just stay as a minor character, no offense. Oh-uh, the Kyuubi Festival...it won't end well for Naruto... And I can't wait for Hitomi to meet Hari's friends! I hope you update soon!
BlankCanvas624 chapter 5 . 8/6/2017
Oh, so THAT'S why! I'm really sorry for asking you, I should have read it first...
BlankCanvas624 chapter 2 . 8/6/2017
Um... I'm sorry if you had your reason but I was wondering... why didn't Harry use a shrinking charm on his clothes and point me spell for direction? I know he didn't have his wand and he said his magical core felt fine but a little weak, so I assume it's enough for 2 spell. I'm really sorry if this seems like a flame, I'm not really good with words so...
Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2017
1: Anko's hair is light purple (could be considered a shade of grey)
2: WHATCHU MEAN "When he joins the Academy next year." YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW THE CHILD'S age! AND SAVE NARUTO THE AGE USUALLY 7 DURING PEACETIME. SERIOUSLY, DO YOU CARE ABOUT THE PROPHECY THAT MUCH?!
orangesorafan chapter 21 . 6/3/2017
awesome more please
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 21 . 5/31/2017
I think Harry is going to flip out. I think it would be nice is the Karumi girl who Harry saw with Red hir and was shy ended up in his team with Naruto as well. Naruto is loyal, the girl is smart, and Harry has strategy. I think it would be good balance. Let's see Naruto is good for frontal assault with his clones or stealth if he put his running and hiding from Anbu at a young age to use. Karumi would be good for genjutsu and what not so that too would be good for a infiltration team. Harry is good for ninjutsu which is long range, plus his magic might help as well. All in all those three with Hatake would make a good infiltration team of done right, and with Harry being able to be a wolf it could double as tracking as well.

Now I hope Harry hangs with Naruto since he is usually hurt on the festival on the day of his birth due to his burden. And I hope he can help Karumi as she doesn't deserve to be abused just because she failed, which wasn't her fault, but rather the bullies fault. I do so hope this gets continued, and if you were at a mental back I hope my ideas thus far have helped some and given you possible ideas for more content. :)
Rangle chapter 1 . 5/30/2017
This is the second time I tried to read this, and it's even worst than the first time. The theme of poor, lost, and traumatic toddler Harry, is just too overdone. It's uninspiring and bland.
Guess chapter 21 . 5/27/2017
Very interesting story!
Mizudoriko chapter 21 . 5/27/2017
Wow, I look forward to the next update~
Guest chapter 21 . 5/25/2017
I'll be waiting for the next chapter~
Nihatclodra chapter 16 . 5/24/2017
Good, you didn't go the "limiting magic" route...
Nihatclodra chapter 13 . 5/24/2017
Just say that it's the elemental bloodline "Aether", and element that is none of the elements, a void element.

Limiting himself to a single type of magic is annoying, and absolutely doomed to fail; he WILL inevitably come across a situation that he has to use a different kind of magic, and doing so will cause all sorts of problems.

It's literally not worth it. Just be vague and give a non-answer like "Aether", it may cause some problems as a whole, but less than being found out to have lied later on will...
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