|Reviews for Right Here Waiting|
| Almaz Arianthi Ravenwing chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
I always wondered what would happen if Laurie and Beth married. I cried so hard when I read the part where she died.
| Lord Mortensen chapter 6 . 1/14/2012
Wonderful!, update soon I love this fanfic
| autumnrose2010 chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
Beth doesn't still play with dolls but she does collect them and updates their wardrobe occasionally...
| Kar chapter 6 . 1/5/2012
Beth is still playing with dolls? I've been really enjoying this but that might need a quick comment or expansion. Foreshadowing for future children or as gifts for the Hummels.
| Elisabeth Harker chapter 4 . 12/2/2011
What a sweet story! I've always liked the idea of Beth/Laurie, but found it hard to make it work in fics (you know, without being horrible and killing off other characters). I think you've done a good job here of making it seem authentic. I'm glad you touched a little bit on Laurie's feelings about both Amy and Jo, because that makes his ending up with Beth seem more real to me. Beth is perfectly in character here as well.
I'd love if this story had some resolution between Laurie and Jo similar to how Jo and Laurie work things out and manage to remain friends after he marries Amy in the book. I do think Jo would *love* having Laurie married off to Beth.
| Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
I love the idea of Beth/Laurie! Please update soon!
| Karen chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
There's something truly sweet but not treacly about this. I hope that Beth doesn't worship him too much as she'll be disappoined and I hope that Laurie helps Beth to be more than the mousy sister.
| Baloo18 chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
I love this story so far, I cant wait to read more!
| Quirky Del chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This is an interesting pair, I hadn't really thought of a "what if" with Beth and Laurie. I like your opening here, the beginning with the two of them in the ceremony. Are you going to continue this or was this a one shot snippet? If you do continue it, I'm interested to read more and see where you take it! )