Reviews for The Shinobi Bachelor
Guest chapter 7 . 10/18/2014
can we get an aftermath shot of the two not choosen?
Miasen chapter 7 . 9/7/2014
Oooh, I really liked this one. Funny and sweet, exactly the fic I needed to read right now. :-)
One Strange Onion chapter 7 . 7/12/2014
I guess that's about as romantic as Kakashi can get.
Yet surprisingly, still very in character. I like it. ;D
One Strange Onion chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
*Sigh* I feel like he took one step forward and three steps back.
One Strange Onion chapter 5 . 7/12/2014
Holy crap, I was kind of joking about the whole "bromance" thing, but now I feel like I just read the literary version of the actual song.
And Naruto could watch someone's child! Look how well Konohamaru turned out!
*Deftly dodges lightning strike*

'Kashi needs to get his $$ in gear before 'Ruka and 'Zumo decide to stay with each other instead of pining after their crushes.
One Strange Onion chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
Aww.. *Sniffle*
One Strange Onion chapter 3 . 7/12/2014
Kotetsu and Izumo just have a serious bromance going on, that's all.
Yūgao scares me a little.. "I'd like to have a baby with you, but if not, I'll just have a one night stand." Not a very healthy approach to motherhood..
But then, I'm trying to apply logic to a fanfiction about ninjas with magic powers.
One Strange Onion chapter 2 . 7/12/2014
Oh, now I'm wondering what Yūgao's chocolate was.. (_)"
jj chapter 7 . 9/17/2013
nice I kinda want an epiloge
jj chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
lov the chocolate meanings
N Harmonic chapter 7 . 8/10/2013
awe
Fi Suki Saki chapter 7 . 7/13/2013
So Izumo become rich?

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Kyaaaaa! I love this fic! Though at first i'm afraid to read it..., #peace

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It's amazing! The humor was so laughable! The feeling of the characters was made me nervous!
Especially about Temari... Since i more chose her to be with Shikamaru rather than Kakashi. Glad Gaara even asked Kakashi to not marry her for good..! ;)

The date part at Ichiraku in previous chapter made me felt awkward...! Glad Naruto came in that moment! Gaara need him for that!

And glad Kakashi support Hinata with Naruto! ;3

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Who actually like whom first? Kakashi or Iruka?

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I like all part when Kakashi gave a reason to the people who out of the choice...! That was so nice!

And i'm glad Tsunade didn't really get mad at the final! She even felt happy! Yaaayy!

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Just too bad Shikamaru didnt appear... If he show up, maybe can give a complicated feeling for Temari... *peace*

Anyway... NICE!
Wandering Crimson Sage chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
Adorable :)

(Stayed up too late *cough*early*cough* reading this. Meh. That's about as in depth as my mind is willing to go.)

But I liked it
Kanemoshi chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
_ this story was adorable!
sairakanzaki chapter 7 . 1/21/2013
this story is great and i like it!

i hope it's have a sequel where Iruka will pregnant due to Orochimaru's formula or experiment or something...

keep it up the good work your a great writer. ;)
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