This story was funny, and this chapter was just hilarious. I can't wait to read more, and I might go and check out the other stories as well.

wow nice job

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Hard to read in first person dude

This was more of an interlude than an omake

You motherfucker. I don't want your fuckin omake, I want you to update this goddamned story already.

There is a large number of things wrong with this story, but the only one I am going to focus on write now is the most important. Your English. Suffice to say, your English is very bad, grammatically, there are numerous problems and issues, you've misspelled a large number of words, many of your sentences sound awkward, some of them aren't even complete! Just look at this sentence:

But when I could finally look at a woman without blush, I became curious and decided to sneak into the may think it is easy to sneak into a library, it is not.

This sentence is absolutely terrible. Not only is it incorrect, it's also more than one sentence. You ended up cutting one half of your first sentence off, then adding what looked like a second sentence without adding a period. To top it all off, you misspelled the first word that would have started the second sentence.

When I could finally look at women without blushing, I became curious and decided to sneak into the library. Many people think sneaking into the library is easy, but it's not. Trust me, I know.

Take a look at this corrected sentence, or paragraph as it now has more than one sentence. If you read the two out loud, I'm sure you'll notice that the corrected version flows much more smoothly. The reader won't be trying to figure out what Naruto attempted to sneak into, nor will they wonder what may has to do with sneaking into a library.

Before you focus on anything else, you should really focus on fixing up your English. I would suggest getting a beta reader until you become a good enough writer that you can correct your own mistakes. At the moment, this is the only advice I can really give you.

WTF?! I know Bieber sucks, but WFT?

Congrats, you have lost a follower. Worthless filth of the Earth. Hurry up and die like the filth you are.

God this has nothing to do with your story I hate it when authors become stupid enough to post shut like this when they write a story this just proves how much you don't care about your readers and makes people want to remove this from there list if they have been supporting you.

Your Author Notes to Story ratio is depressing in this chapter.

Wait...WHAT? TROLL much? Hahahahahaha! Nice

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