Nice

Hahhahahahhahahahaha wow I love this author I never thought of author style!

I hope that this story isn't doa.

Love it, it has serious potential now if u could redeem ino and/or make her his slave that would work just as well, but then again what about the majority of the female haruno clan? If you can make them clan slaves to naruto? Let's not forget yuugao uzuki(anbu neko/cat),Anko mitarashi, fem. itachi and an alive mikoto,tsume and hana inuzuka added to his harem.

i hope that you will continue this soon :)

Pls update

Don't put sonic' name it's already been taking it

Wonderful story I really liked it a lot shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

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you soo copyed that from soul eater

I like the story and the lemons so far, BUT:

Killing the Kyuubi without talking to him/her seems harsh. Especially if Kyuubi was controlled by the Sharingan.

Not writing a lemon for Narutos first time is disappointing. Not to mention the next lemons are oral and anal... normal lemons would begin with vaginal not anal, whatever.

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This story is off the hook, and I can't wait unail the next update! I really dig the Naruto/femShino pairing.

Are Shino and Hinata the only canon characters in Naruto's harem?

hey good story; was wondering though? you gonna continue this bout of awesomeness? or are you going to abandon it seeing as its been quite a while since your last update.

This is really sweet...

When a girl is quiet, a million things are running through her mind.

When a girl is not arguing, she is thinking deeply.

When a girl looks at you with her eyes full of question, she is wondering how long you will be around.

When a girl answers "I'm fine." after a few seconds, she is not fine at all.

When a girl stares at you, she is wondering why you are lying.

When a girl rests her head on your chest, she is wishing for you to be her's forever.

When a girl wants to see you everday, she wants to be pampered.

When a girl says "I love you." she means it.

When a girl says "I miss you." nobody could miss you more than that.

Life only comes around once, so make sure you spend it with the right person.

Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, and calls you back when you hang up on him.

The guy who will stay awake just to watch you sleep.

Wait for the guy who kisses your forehead,

Who wants to show you off to the world when you are in your sweats.

The one who holds your hand in front of his friends and is constantly reminding you of how much he cares about you and how lucky he is to have you there for him.

The one who turns to his friends and declares "That's her.".

If you read this, you have to repost it, guy or girl, or you will have bad luck for the rest of your life.

If you repost this, in five minutes your true love will call or message you.

Tonight at midnight, they will realize that they love you.

Something good will happen at approximately 1:42 pm tomorrow, and it could happen anywhere.

So get ready for the biggest shock of your life.

If you don't repost this, you will be cursed with relationship problems for all of eternity.

Repost this to your profile, and spare yourself the emotional stress.