Reviews for Sage of Vixens King of Perverts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The grammar... it burns us! But other than that, it's a decently interesting lemon fic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would be considered as more of a lime then a lemon. |
![]() ![]() So fucking funy god! |
![]() ![]() ![]() if Shino wants to better her chances at becoming fitting type of demon, wouldn't asking Chomei for help be about the best chance they could have? |
![]() ![]() ![]() is that Sephiroth's Masamune? oooh now i fee like listening to one winged angel for the rest of the night :) |
![]() ![]() what i like most about this story is that it starts out as pure smut but instead of remaining that way you actually moved it to a real story with a real plot instead of just near pointless sex |
![]() ![]() ![]() Parabéns pela estória continue são poucas as vezes me divirto nessas estória sua estória é muito diferente. Shino mulher me lembrou devorah e isso foi uma cartada interessante bem diferente mesmo imprecioante sério parabéns continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where do you come up with this shit... BECAUSE YOU HAVE GOLD |
![]() ![]() Porfa actualiza pronto |
![]() ![]() Please have krystal lemon and pregnant in the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() And your ass sucking, fellow Kishimoto loving dumb-fucks can rot and die with you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story I cant get enough of it. A lot of bashing though. I mean iknow sakura was kind of useless and yelled a whole lot but other than her u do a lot of bashing on other characters. you simply make everyone else look retarded. Especially kakashi but hes a lil more serious and complex. Your story is one of my favs, this is not critism. I am simply stating an opinion. I just think your making all the side characters have images. And yes this is a fan fic and its yours, but can at least put them as them selves even if they have nothing to do with the overall outcome of the story. Thank you for listening/reading. Btw I think your authors notes are hilarious. I probably enjoy them as much as I do with the story. Oh and great lemon scenes. I try to write them but just cant seem to make them as good as yours. Could you give me some pointers? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I been there over protect ****** anyways like omake and story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Start, Looking Foward to the Rest. |