Make more of this it is really good

Well I can't take this anymore, damn canon lover. Afraid you having excellent spelling and grammar doesn't make up for the fact that you have your lips on Kishimoto's ass.

Got to say awsome story really enjoyed up the greatvwork adding u to fav update when u can

Wtf? So lost

I would love to see how Naruto, and Shino make Hinata into a angle then into a fallen angel.

I hope you continue this story, and I hope there's some seriously hard bashing soon.

interesting pairing but it does work out well looking forward to see where you take this

Multiple personality disorder or...are you supporting the claim of Freud -.-?

Just one thing, I FU*ING LOVE IT! :D

huh, i failed to see these updates wow im slow. nice new chapters my friend and very well written considering the style used. i hope to read more my friend. i shall await the day when the updates flow free from your mind.

That was a good lemon

O-hoh! i see you've fell into the portal of Mareth, it's certainly lovely this time of year, isn't it?
how is it Fellow Champion?

anyway, continue doing this funny fic!

Cloan 2 remineds me of Charlotte Collhorn from bleach

Im sorry, but even though this story kinda had potential at first... It just so so bad after Naruto returns, he is so smug and overpowered I want him dead, you made him even more repulsive than freaking SASUKE! Lemons are bad too, like some cheap pornflick without any feelings, 5$ whores have more passion than characters in this story. Overal its just bad.

Loved it keep it up can't wait to read more