Best part of the story is the Lord of the Rings cameo.

I normally don’t like re writes but this was amazing!

Anakin and Padme watching LOTR is something I didn't know I needed in my life thank you

Er

Sheesh

Bro wtf

Bro's rizz is under the charts :skull:

Damn his rizz is off the charts

Who would have thought that once the male best friend and secret lover is finally out of the picture the relationship can finally flourish? Honestly, it was good for the most part, no action which sucked, just drama and romance, which is in the description but i was expecting some action since this was a star wars novel. Certain things were hard to dismiss like obiwans godly and perfect character. That was quite annoying, it would have been better if you took the opposite approach and turned him into a PoS. Afterall, in the movies, he never agreed with the decision to bring anakin into the jedi. Only when his master asked him in his dying breath did he accept. 6/10

So vader and maul both knew vader was being followed, right? How can someone use the force and not tell they were being followed?

So she went to train for a few weeks and now shes a warrior? I dont care what type of training she received, any person who has trained a few years in their craft for bounty hunting or assassin work would wreck the floor with her unless she is force sensitive

An intriguing story!

I was holding my breath the last two chapters, I had no idea who it could possibly have a happy ending. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

This chapter brought me to tears. I had a breakdown too. Poor Padme!

I love that her parents ‘know’ and that Ruwee had his secrets too. Very powerful chapter!