|Reviews for If I Die Young|
| dragooonthegreat chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
such a sad fic btu still a really really good story!
| Atherys chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
...bury me in satin, lay me down
You're really really good with all this dark and depressing stuff. I'm starting to believe I'll have become suicidal before having read through everything you've ever written(that happens to be my intention)?..
Excuse me while I go favourite the heck out of your stories.
| COEUR DE LORDE chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
LOL! Sorry this made me laugh _ Poor clueless Merlin...hahahah!
I know that this was supposed be serious and all but...that one line...BWAHAHAHA!
Of course Arthur dies and when Merlin realizes that he's not breathing just thinks
LOL Good job!
| Steffi Hoffman chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
That was so very sat, but kind of sweet.
I'm sorry that Arthur seemed to think that him dying would bring Merlin relief, and I'm glad that Merlin tried to set him straight.
I never thought that I could see the line "then don't look" used in a way that was not cruel, but you managed it. My heart broke, but you managed it.
The world just won't give the two a break. It didn't even let them say goodbye. I wonder what Merlin will do now. We all know that it isn't just his destiny that makes him stay with Arthur. When Arthur dies, a part of Merlin dies too.