Reviews for Wait! Please don't go
Guest chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
PERFECTION. This is the type of GerIta I have been craving all week
Guest chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
This lemon-searcher is continuing to the next chapter.
fanfictor17 chapter 5 . 9/24/2013
I hate to ask this...but where did Romano end up while Luddy and Feli got...um...bizzay?
felicianavargas.752bc-c.italy chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
I just want to let you know that Italy would be older because Italy was founded 752 B.C.
Angel of Randomosity chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
Awwweee... 3
NicoleBrandy chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
HAH! I'm currently on chapter three, and may I just say, this author note KILLED me! ヮ And the story is wonderful! Love! GerIta epicness! -
XxXSoManyFandoms-.-'XxX chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
I just started reading this fic yesterday and I couldn't stop, but then at like two a.m. my mom said I had to go to bed and I was like nooo because I was on the final chapter and I loved the story and my eyes were glued to the screen! I can't wait to read more of your stories! This one was amazing so I can only imagine how the rest of them are :D And by the way I'll be reading that Bleach one soon!
Arthur Blake chapter 5 . 5/24/2012
This was a very sweet story, but sadly one thing kinda of ruined it for me, as a reader that understands German.

Your German writing wasn't very good in the last chapter. Google Translate is a bitch when it comes to German now you know

I don't know about the Italian part though...

But otherwise, the story is great!

Just be sure to at least have a betareader or something whenever you write in a foreign language. If you want it to be correct, at least
Crystal Hope Dragon chapter 5 . 5/12/2012
I loved it. Your grammar had errors here and there, but other than that it was a great story. I loved the plot, please keep up the good work.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 5 . 4/3/2012
What a sweet ending. It's so cute how they admit their love for one another. Nice work with this story.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 4 . 4/3/2012
Nice chapter. It's very romantic and descriptive. I suppose that is much better than any spoken apology. Good work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 3 . 4/3/2012
Nice chapter. Once again, your take on Lovino is great, especially how he wants to hurt the man who hurt his brother so bad.

The scene with Prussia and Germany is nicely done. It's great how you have Prussia give him a pep talk without breaking his character. The hug is sweet.

Now that Ludwig has seen Feli again will he finally apologize? I look forward to the next chapter.

Good work with this one.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
Nice chapter. Poor Italy, crying all night. Germany should feel guilty and you did a good job with writing the guilt. The details of his poor appearance helps show just how much he regrets what he said.

I love it when Lovino goes into big brother mode and it was nicely done here. He always tries to act all tough, but he's such a softie on the inside. It's easy to believe he would lash out at Germany for hurting his little brother.

You might want to choose one point of view (at least keep it to one per chapter), because the constant switching is somewhat distracting.

Other than that this is a great chapter. Nice job.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Nice first chapter and a good way to start up the drama. Oh dear, Ludwig is going to regret what he said to Feli. I understand he was annoyed, but he should know how sensitive his dear Feli is. Poor Feliciano, Ludwig should run after him and give him a hug. Good work with this first chapter.
Jane Foster chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
. ! I love you! :D this was one of the best GerIta I ever read! I was like "Oh my God! I need to become Feli!" XD don't worry for your Lemon they were "Superbe"! (Yes I'm an half French so I like to put some French words sorry ")

Well. Stay like this and I'll found a new religion!

Thanks again!

PS: You'll made an PruCan? Tell me when it's will be ready! I love this pairing! *w* Maple!

Yours Truly. Sogequeen
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