|Reviews for The Beginnings of a Hero|
| Proto R3n3A chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
It's cool that you're writing Aura's beginning.
| Darkchubb chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
First off. . . For the first half of this chapter you were referring to Udina as Udine, you might wanna fix that.
It looks like this story is well under way, good to see you havnt fallen of the side of the world again. You know, next chapter is going to be a bit interesting, you didn't say why they were arrested XD
and finally. . . FIRST REVIEW!
Till next time, darkchubb