|Reviews for New Data|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/8
That was amazing! Tails x renamon
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
this story is so jizz blasting it made me want to cum all over the place
even though i never watched digimon that was still hot
| Orthodox chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Well, from what I'm seeing, it's mixed.
Your grammar and spelling could really use some work. Divide up your sentences; you have a lot of run-ons. Same thing with the paragraphs.
You've captured the characters' personalities pretty well.
If you want, I could edit this for you. As in polish the chapters up. Let me know what you think!
Overall, it had potential, it's just rusty. I hope you update soon! I want to see some Renamon action!
| pensuka chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
well that cuaght tails and rouge off guard keep up the updates