|Reviews for Everlasting Why|
| harleys chapter 26 . 12/19/2012
Definitely one of the best rescue scenes I've ever read
| Eduardiana chapter 41 . 12/19/2012
I'm so sad for Jake. He is not with Leah anymore and away from his family and friends. Maybe it's for the better.
And I'm so happy for B&E.
This is my second vamp fic. Well, the second I finished. I thought I didn't like them, until I read The Keepsake. And then I found this story in someone's favourite list and I couldn't stop reading.
My english is far from perfect but I read pretty fast. It's with writing that I have trouble. But at the beginning I had trouble reading this story. There are so few dialogues and the language so rich, full of new words to me that I was frustrated at first, but then I got used to the rythm of your writing.
I just wanted to tell you that I really, really loved this story and all the characters. It was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us!
| Eduardiana chapter 39 . 12/19/2012
Bella's dream was perfect to let us know-when she can't-about her change. Loved it.
| Eduardiana chapter 38 . 12/19/2012
"but the slender figure turns, a weightless dancer spun by invisible currents, and the cloud of chocolate hair concealing her features shifts, revealing the still oval of Bella's face." again, the way you describe things. Sad and beautiful at the same time.
| Eduardiana chapter 37 . 12/19/2012
Leah is such an awful person. She sees Bella in that state and treats her so bad. She has no empathy at all.
"Do you trust me?" Bella steps forward, falling into the embracing sky.
The ending of this chapter left me breathless.
| Eduardiana chapter 36 . 12/19/2012
"He couldn't hear your heartbeat. He knew instantly you were gone." So sad.
"I fed this morning. I was far too eager to hear your reasoning to miss your arrival." I like Tanya a lot. I totally understand her anger toward Bella because she has what Tanya wanted always: Edward's love and Tanya thinks she threw it away. I like all the sisters.
| Eduardiana chapter 34 . 12/19/2012
I can't believe I like Jake. He is so nice, such a good friend. So different from the canon, this Jake is not manipulative.
And Bella? What is she doing?! Poor Edward! Her note was so cold.
| Eduardiana chapter 31 . 12/19/2012
The lack of communication between them frustrates me!
| Eduardiana chapter 29 . 12/19/2012
I loved Bella reading while listening to Tanya's albums, the dance with Edward and of course when he was playing the piano. Such a beautiful chapter. You describe things in a way that make me feel I'm there with them.
| harleys chapter 21 . 12/19/2012
Another great chapter!
| Eduardiana chapter 26 . 12/19/2012
I love, love how he caught her in the air. Bella was so brave and stupid at the same time.
| Eduardiana chapter 25 . 12/19/2012
They had such a great time in Chicago and then the Quileutes ruined it all. I'm so angry at Sue right now and all of them for treating her like a child and give her no choice.
| Eduardiana chapter 21 . 12/19/2012
"Life goes on without you."
"What if I already feel like that's happening?" loved them holding hands looking at his old house.
| Eduardiana chapter 20 . 12/19/2012
"You were going to defend me?" I loved his amusement and Bella's embarrassment.
| Eduardiana chapter 18 . 12/19/2012
Beautiful chapter. I loved his relief that she wasn't disgusted at him.