Reviews for Everlasting Why
Guest chapter 41 . 12/29/2013
This is an amazing story! At times I would argue that your writing is far superior than that of Stephanie Meyer! You've done a brilliant job, I felt so much emotion in this story and found it very hard to put down. By far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read (and I read a lot of them)! Thanks for sharing your talent. Tay xo
SiriuslyPink chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Your writing style is confusing and I have no idea what just happened in this prelude, but seeing as it's only the first chapter and you've got good grammar from what I saw, I'm gonna read on.
REgrrl chapter 41 . 12/12/2013
Thank you for sharing this incredible take on twilight. Exceptionally well written and unique. Loved it.
Guest chapter 41 . 11/25/2013
Wonderful! Just wonderful!
Bonifashka chapter 41 . 11/24/2013
It was a good read, thank you :)
I can't say I liked the last chapter very much but I rarely do in most books) But overall you have managed to show them as more human and more humane than in the original book (and I appreciate incorporating bits of history and showing character development as well).
Keep writing!:)
Btw, anyone here signed up to The Future of Storytelling free online course by the University of Potsdam? I am and it's pretty awesome for a free course:)
tmv66 chapter 12 . 11/9/2013
I have to admit, after the last chapter, I googled the meaning of amaranth. I didn't get "Immortal Love", but I did get 2 options equally fitting:
Amaranth: Unchanging
Amaranthus: (Love lies bleeding) Hopeless, heartless

What made it seem so fitting is the "love lies bleeding", as in the song Hemorrhage, by Fuel, which was on S. Meyers "playlist" for Midnight Sun!
Guest chapter 41 . 9/17/2013
This was different, but I liked it. Thanks for sharing your talent.
DreamMine chapter 41 . 8/23/2013
thank you! it's an amazing story! and the style you wrote it in is just...to die for! cheers!
kalibean chapter 41 . 7/9/2013
Lovely story - I enjoyed the premise and the tweaks to canon :)
luvyateamedward chapter 41 . 6/28/2013
Great story and writing. Couldn't get enough of it.
mauigirl60 chapter 41 . 6/27/2013
I so loved this story. It's rare to find a good vampire story and at least there was no fade-to-black moments. The romance and intimacy was done very tastefully. This story is seriously under-reviewed. Your writing is beautifully descriptive and I enjoyed the experience. Thank you for sharing this! xox
Gingerandgreen chapter 41 . 6/1/2013
Your story kept me up all night! It was utterly captivating. I would never have survived this as a WiP, thank god it was complete. Thank you for sharing it.
G&G xox
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 16 . 5/15/2013
Wow
Jasper I assume was thirsty

What will happen next?
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 5/14/2013
So sad for Bella. I can relate.
swan0456 chapter 41 . 4/19/2013
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I really enjoyed your writing style, and how it felt so much like one of those novels you quote at the start of each chapter. Thanks so much for writing it,
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