Reviews for Everlasting Why
sujari6 chapter 3 . 11/15/2011
Great chapter.
trueform chapter 3 . 11/15/2011
Sad, intriguing and spooky.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 2 . 11/15/2011
I'm interested to see where you're going with this. Why did Edward get caught? Why was the cop happy to arrest him? What is Bella's job exactly? What is Edward supposed to do there?
taurus14 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
I love your use of words, very descriptive! I'm sure Edward is going to show up again at some point soon, I do think that Bella can't stop thinking about her strange interaction with him, he definitely isn't the typical teenager. I take it her father has either moved or passed away, as I think she is in what was or is her fathers home, sounds like it's lonely and depressing for her to think about it too much.
Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Oh, man, was a sad, lonely, unfulfilling life Bella is living right now. I hope Edward can help her change that.
trueform chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
Very absorbing. Look forward to future installments.
SleepMyBella chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
I love your story! I can't wait to read more!
lionola chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
Great chapter, love it!
manda2784 chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
Great story so far. This Bella and Edward are very different. I like it!
dreampills chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
i love the way that this story is written! ) i like the mystery that it bring
RandomCran chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
Hello SIM,

I loved the interaction between Edward and Bella in this chapter. There is great tension between these two in just this one interaction.

Although Bella was relieved when it ended, I was a little sad to see Edward go. I was enjoying their back and forth interrogation.

I'm hoping they'll run into one another again soon.

Looking forward to the next update.

Take Care,

Jenn
Angeldolphin01 chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
I like it.
littlelizruth chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
a mystery so far indeed!:)
dinotopian chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
Thank you!
Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
A singular event in the interview

a life so singular

so still

Charlie?

Is she going through the motions or just motioning to keep going?

Reb
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