Reviews for Fresh Fruit
IndyGirl89 chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
That was cute. Reminds me of the end of the movie, when the girls are doing that. :)
I am that Writer chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Awww, so cute! I love the names and personalities you made up for the girls!
Jane McAvoy chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Adorable! Such silliness and creativity at the same time. You have a lovely sense of humor.
Mrs Snowball chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Wait, the Red-Haired Girls are the Captain's daughters? Now THAT I've never seen before. Very interesting connection, and such a cute story! Nice work. :)
BroadwayFanGirl91 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Do the red haired girls even have names for the movie?

Great story! I noticed it's not completed, is there more to come? XD
bStormhands chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
That was so cute. I love the names you gave the girls, Great solution for Pascal.
AmityGirl28 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
The red-haired girls are so cute! And they're the Captain's daughters? How are they even related to him? They're nice and sweet while he's mean and strict. They must've got it from their mother or something. I liked how Pascal turned pink when one of the girls asked if Rapunzel and Eugene kissed again. I also liked how Pascal ate an entire pear. That must be twice his size and he ate it with no problem! You should write more because I always enjoy your stories!