Reviews for Lost Innocence
cara9001 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
very sad i love it
01110011 01110101 01101001 011 chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
poor vegeta! its still good!
Draconian Elflord chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
I hardly ever review. But this, God, this just begs it of me. IT was absolutely incredible. I could literally feel the pain that this poem expresses. Vegeta has always been my favorite character. He's one tough guy, but I'm convinced that he has a good amount of painful skeletons in his closet. Knowing that a person you trusted all the years was the one who orphaned you and obliterated your entire race, your entire planet...is there anything more angsty than that. Your poem rocked big time. If you were here, I'd hug you.
Vicky-V chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Short and bittersweet. I loved it, it sounds like a poem I did once.

(When are you going to update Vegeta's Nightmare. I'm dying here.)
Ouji-Chan chapter 1 . 6/10/2002
-Purrs at her.- Hey Fate Chan nice poem. I never stopped to read it before but it certainly has depth and feeling in it. You should write more poetry.
SaiyanQueenVega chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
Great _ It's even got a beat. Nice to see another DBZ poet around here.