|Reviews for Deluge in the Wasteland|
| SeptarSenior chapter 20 . 8/24
Jason having second thoughts about being Robin? He was obsessed with being Robin in the comics, so a little OOC. But still loved the story
| LordRevan66 chapter 22 . 7/29
Good story wish you'd do more
| GalanthaDreams chapter 22 . 2/17
This was a such a beautifully written piece, it was thoughtful and heartrending and utterly compelling. When Talia finally saw the side of her father that Bruce did, my stomach dropped, even though I never much liked him because of his extremism. I also loved how you mirrored Talia's actions to get her and Jason to Bruce with that of the story she read. All in all, it was gorgeous and glorious way to spend a day off.
| The Richmaster chapter 22 . 10/15/2015
This was an amazing story, I loved everything about it, particularly the way you showed the mindsets and interactions of the character.
| Angel yao chapter 22 . 6/28/2015
I absolutely loved this story,and I have to say that you wrote each character beautifully. Thanks for this amazing fic.
| Xehanort10 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
The fanfic is great so far. And I agree about Grant Morrison. Him turning Talia from an anti hero who sometimes does good things and sometimes evil things into an evil villain was stupid.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 22 . 5/10/2015
It was a really good story that knew how to play with the emotions of its characters. I really like how you developed the relationship between Talia and Jason but that haunting vision that Talia saw at her fathers residence is really bugging me, but in a way that shows what a good author you are to allow us to get attached to these characters we know in a different way to what we are used to.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 21 . 5/10/2015
Is anyone else terrified that a highly trained assassin princess and a legendary Amazonian warrior have made fast friends...I feel so sorry for any idiot that dares to get on their bad side lol
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 18 . 5/10/2015
I like the idea behind this chapter, it really does emphasize how Talia is different from most of the other love interests that Batman has in the comics, yes their are a lot of strong female characters in canon but as you say they usually follow the story of getting in over their heads and having to wait to be rescued by Batman. I will have to track down that epic poem
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 16 . 5/10/2015
I loved this chapter XD I just hope Jason managed to get in a few good hits on the guards that finally caught him. It does say something for his stealth skills that he was able t listen in on a conversation between Talia and her father without Ra's knowing
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 15 . 5/10/2015
I know Bruce is anxious at the moment but he couldn't even take a minute to reassure Dick :/ as for Jason wondering off; lol XD
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 10 . 5/9/2015
Jason is too damn cute XD
It's amazing how you have Talia and Jason bonding, it seems so natural and has a nice flow to it.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 8 . 5/9/2015
All I can do is stare at the screen right now...I know I need to read the next chapter but I'm kind of frozen at the moment O-0
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 7 . 5/9/2015
Tastefully done but thanks for the warning.
Jason's reaction was brilliant, I can just imagine the sly smirk he's going to be wearing hile Bruce drives him to school lol XP
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 6 . 5/9/2015
lol I love the line "Ra's Al ghoul is a better parent, great" the irony, I love it