Reviews for jenn's return
Amber wibbelsman chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
I like how jen didn't die and radicals came to save her.
Critic chapter 7 . 4/7/2014
Your typing is terrible. You don't even have apostrophes around the dialogue... And, you didn't include the fact that Luke is poor and probably couldn't afford a cell phone. All in all, I'd rate it at half a star.
loststorieshogwartz chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Um... No offense, but it seems like the two authors need to work it out. And new author (I don't remember ur pen name) u need to work on ur grammar. I can't tell when people are talking. U need a Beta.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
You need to use the marks that show someone it talking and Jen is spelled Jen not Jenn and use capital letters for her name she's a person but so far good story keep it up
a person chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
nice. I like it.
Awesome fic chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This iS the best fanfiction I ever read. Can you make more?
mangeko crossagan chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
hey thanks for letting me take over the story chickorita trainer 1
Chikorita-Trainer1 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Um...so...is there a reason the first chapter is MY WORK? Why did you just steal my fanfic and call it your own?