Reviews for Inconvenient Ideal
navime chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I love your style of writing, it's incredibly interesting. :)
Lisoata chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Brilliant! L contemplating Light and Kira's justice in an utterly L-like manner. What reason has he given for everyone thinking he would immediately dismiss Kira out of hand? They're so similar that it's hard to believe he wouldn't at least consider.

Your metaphors are intriguing and well-chosen and would that 'superhuman' at the end be a reference to Nietsche's ubermensch by any chance? Lingering emotion after you've read it, but you there could be more poeticism in certain parts.

The end, however, is brilliant.


Brilliant. (like the city lights?)

NowThis chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
TBBT is charging and I realized I hadn't read your other stories ._.

How come I missed THIS? It's brilliant!

Well, I couldn't follow some of it - might be from by lack in intellectual capacities or because I've watched that thing all day.

I love you for being so brilliant :D

Why are yo friends with me, again?