|Reviews for The Begining Of The End|
| IkarosMelan chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Not trying to be mean, but why don't you just watch the show? If you're not familiar with the characters, that's fine, but it does help if you just watch an episode or two.
However, if you do need help with character personalities, PM me anytime.
Great story! Keep it up!
| nickorin fusionspark chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
| Distrustful Des chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Your story makes my brain hurt
| TheodoraTalon chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I say it'll be an interesting story. But chapter one is still too confusing, and I don't know if I could help you much. I'm still a noob at writing and I haven't written a Fanfic before.
| Kirbysamful chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
strange right after i watch the first ep of HSOTD this is posted
| dannyphantom01 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
You need to make your chapters longer.