|Reviews for De Profundis|
| iswiminrain chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Wow, really good and intense! Loved it!
| Rinne chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Wow. Exceedingly well done.
| MissDonnie chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
loved the story, and your writing is wonderful
| Gone2Far chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Excellent writing. Very believable reactions from his team. I know this is a one-shot but, it is the excellent basis for other chapters. Good job.
| mentalistfan124 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I'm kind of crying. A lot. A lot of ugly crying.
That was . . .
so devastatingly good.
lol but it was!
keep writing, you're good at it
| Allie9 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
| MeltedChocoButton chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Very moving and well written. I thought the team and Jane were in character. Although Jane's never been this vulnerable and lost in front of the team before, (as far as I've seen), it rang true to me. It was so sad to hear him calling out for Lisbon.
Bits I esp. liked:
"She sees a pile of clothes draped across one sink. Jane's coat, vest, shirt. Taken off for better access to veins."
The detached assessment makes it so much bleaker.
" She wants to take him in her arms, bundle his agony into her sympathy."
Lovely sentiment .
Thanks for writing:)