|Reviews for The Stay|
| Lukillthemall chapter 25 . 12/15/2012
hnmm.. okay. where do I start?..
at first, I was really confused with this fic because I have.. hnm emotional problems. I found it funny to see a fic about it, and with my favorite ship I was happy because edward wasn't on it all the time!
then I hated jacob more than anything
and I loved jasper because of his.. I don't know, I just loved him. I loved alice too.
and rosalie, I can't help but love her. emmet is such a good guy.
bella was a little bit dumb. but come on we all are right..
I just can't tell you everything I felt during this fanfiction and I think.. I loved it a lot. I loved the way it ended and I wish it wouldn't end. I loved it so much I'm still crying- sobbing.
it also helped me with my own problems and I just wanna say fuck you I love you! ajklhfkjhasdf I love you and I loved this.
| A2463 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
| HonesztDeniial chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
I never review. But, seeing as I was completely sucked in from the very beginning, I just had to. I didn't once skim over a part of a chapter like I sometimes do. The emotion each character showed was so real it scared me; the dread I felt with each character as they went through their problems was intense. I had to remind myself this was just a story more than once. This is why I prefer the fan fiction to the real twilight series. Authors like you blow my mind.
Anyway, just had to get that out there. You rock.
| Blue-Haired Siren chapter 25 . 9/29/2012
This was a sweet story, and very good. It combined the darkness of real life situations with the motto that the darkness doesn't always last. I loved everything, although in the beginning I wanted to shake Bella for being so oblivious to everything.
| Seven chapter 3 . 9/4/2012
I am not sure what, but does seem that something is going on.
| Seven chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Oh man, looks like this isnt such a perfect hospital afterall.
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/3/2012
Very well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
| Lunaris-wind chapter 25 . 7/21/2012
This is an interesting idea, and it was executed well. Read it straight through just now and I'm happy I gave it a chance. I just wish we got to see more insight from Alice's mind, especially during the time between Ch. 24 and Ch. 25
| Im a Skyscraper chapter 25 . 7/4/2012
Amazing work. I loved the story.
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/24/2012
You had me sobbing. This story was so emotional and so well written. I felt for all the characters even though we only really knew Bella's point of view. I'm still crying. I absolutely loved the plot line. It was so original. Please don't stop writing and continue to write wonderful fics. I really loved this story and hope you don't ever stop writing.
| sweetdreams chapter 25 . 6/16/2012
This story was so well writen and soooo good! Its 3 something in the morning and i am going to read more of your stories!
| Akiho Tonoshi chapter 25 . 5/27/2012
yay! i finally decided to read this story again! well the rest of it. gotta say, it was fun/good .
| Shrimp Mayo chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Finally, this is back My life is complete again.
| Betsy Cavanaugh chapter 25 . 3/24/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! I cannot even begin to comprehend why this story only has 34...35 reviews. Your institution setting is a breath of fresh air to, not only the Alice/Bella pairing, but to Twilight fanfiction itself. If you ever wanted to write a sequel that would be totally awesome.
Anyway, LOVED the story and keep writing!
| Kyle37 chapter 25 . 1/16/2012
a great story. i dont know if you did much research or did it by accident but the fact that all of the patients were very contradictory and latch onto the first good person they meet was a great insight. keep it up