Reviews for The Stay
cookiesforfrogs chapter 8 . 11/4/2011
I liked this chapter a lot, the confused feelings and the development of what drove bella to this point.
cookiesforfrogs chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
Yep it's official I hate Carlisle. It would have been interesting to see bella hide the injury for longer but probably for the best she was discovered quickly.
cookiesforfrogs chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
Oh dear oh dear and things were going so well, I think the way you are writing bella and her feelings about herself is very good.
cookiesforfrogs chapter 3 . 11/4/2011
Very interesting the kids have certainly got problems.
cookiesforfrogs chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
I am not really sure how I feel about this chapter you have bella commenting that it must be Esme based on the knocking as that is how Esme knocks and yet at that point she is waking up after her first night there how can she have possibly heard Esme knock enough times to recognise it? I am really not sure I like Carlisle at all in this, simply laying out everyone's conditions like that. however I did really like the way you are creating alice. And bella having a problem with toes made me smile.
cookiesforfrogs chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Having some personal experience of this I thought the frist chapter was very good, the bit when bella realises she has scratched the cut was very realistic. I am looking forward to reading more.
qwAEUI chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
I love this story! Great job. These are my favorite characters, so it's nice to see a different type of story about them.
Faith Karma chapter 25 . 11/4/2011
Loved it like the first time I read it. :)
lexy lujan chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Yes! I have been waiting for you to pitbth
JJ47 chapter 25 . 11/3/2011
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